• Published 5th Oct 2015
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A Sick Date - IMNOTHERE889



(Humanized) You go to school camp. You and Rainbow Dash get sick, and are both forced to stay in the sick room until you get better. Things go downhill from there.

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-BONUS- A Little Bit Of Spying

As you and Rainbow fall asleep next to each other, her arm draped over your side, her body pressing close against yours, a few familiar faces appear next to a window, a window in such a perfect position that it allows the people looking through it a perfect view of your bed.

"So, there they are. Adorable, aren't they?" Nurse Redheart was enjoying the adorable view.

"Indeed, Nurse, We simply must save this adorable moment," Vice Principal Luna said, scratching her chin in an attempt to help her think of ideas.

"We can get up early in the morning and take a photo of them cuddling," Principal Celestia suggested.

"Yes, that seems like a good idea!" Luna agreed enthusiastically with her sister.

Five girls walked up to the Principals and the Nurse.

"Hiya Guys! Watcha lookin' at?" Pinkie questioned.

"Yeah, why are you up at this hour? Everyone is already asleep." Sunset rubbed her eyes, trying to keep herself awake.

"Oh, err, we were just checking on Rainbow Dash and her friend." Nurse Redheart lied, of course, because they didn't want Rainbow's friends to see her being so adorable.

"Then shouldn't you have left already? I noticed you walk out of your cabin half an hour ago. why would you stay up this long just to check on the poor souls?" Rarity was making them seem suspicious. The three adults smiled awkwardly and started to sweat nervously.

"Shouldn't you, Uhm, give them some privacy?" Oh, Fluttershy, being shy as usual.

"Yeah. They musta had a long day, so let 'em get some rest." Applejack yawned.

"for now, we'll be heading back to bed." Sunset also yawned and walked away, and the rest of the girls soon followed. The three adults looked back to the window, and smiled at the sight of you and Rainbow cuddling.

"We should get some rest," Luna said.

"Agreed," Celestia said.

"Yesssssss." Nurse Redheart agreed.

Hurrdurr! That's teh end of this story. I hope you enjoyed reading!

Comments ( 20 )

Wait, a second person story featuring RD, and it's rated T?

I have to read this, for the novelty alone....

half an hour ago. Why would you stay up this long just to check on the poor souls?"

Damnit, got my hopes up... Well, it was still a good read regardless, so thanks for sharing the dream of yours.

6498084
Thanks for reading! What are these 'hopes' and 'dream' you speak of?

6498177 You mentioned it was originally a dream of yours, and my hopes were that it wasn't a romance/sexytimes story.

6498228
OH, right, that dream.
Fun fact: this was my first time writing actual making out. HUEHEUHEUHUEHUEHUE :pinkiecrazy:

Very nice! A fine story to be sure and the fact that it stayed sweet and not...well not so sweet, is even better,

Well done!

6613825
Oh, stop, you make me blush... :twilightblush:

6613837 tut tut, it was a good clean story that deserves recognition.

Keep up the good work!

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6660871 maybe. Give me a prompt (I'm kinda runnin' low on creativity magic :twilightsheepish:) and then we have a deal.

6661103 Wow, I wasn't really expecting a response. But I'm not creative at all, and I'm bad at English. I can't think of anything right now but I'll keep it in mind.

6663912 cool.
PS: Always expect a reply.

7068652 wow, that comment was a rollercoaster and a half XD

Loved it! favourited, favourite of favourite, and WOW, thumb up and, one of my real favourites fics :D

7301908 Thank you so much for the kind words.

Hhahaah... ooooh...
Headcanon accepted, Luna, Celestia and Redheart are Sneaky-Creeper-Shippers.
Keep it up!

7508616
Welcome dude~ keep it up!

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