• Member Since 25th May, 2015
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Just A Random Pegasus

I'm just a random user who writes a lot of different ideas that pop into my strange mind, and ships almost everything imaginable.


About a year ago, Rainbow Dash, one of the greatest athletes to ever attend Canterlot High, confessed her love to you, and even asked you out. You didn't know how to respond. At the time, rejection seemed like the best way to go. After she confessed, you ignored her; afraid of her trying to attract you, and also afraid of accidentally saying something to break her heart even more.

Now, Rainbow Dash has come to you with a question that has been on her mind for months.

Proofread by AngelDCS

This story now has a live reading by Naviskypegasus.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 40 )

How the tables have turned

Really nice i enjoyed reading it :)


I doubt I'm going to be making a sequel to this... But I might! It's still undecided. :twilightsmile:


Thanks! I'm happy you enjoyed! :pinkiehappy:

Don't wait too long dude.

Love this. :rainbowwild:(Changes anon to OCS name)... even better :trollestia:

I like this ending. It's sorta bittersweet.

"I poured my heart out to you, and you just abandoned me like I turned into a monster and destroyed the school!"

like I turned into a monster and destroyed the school!

oh eh, hi Sunset, no offence :rainbowderp:

no offence to you either twilight :twilightblush:

This ended pretty differently than usual second person romantic fics. I applaud you for doing something unique.

However, I would love to see a sequel. That's up to you though. :twilightsmile:

Welp. I need more of this.

Good story mate. The only criticism I have is that the pacing was a little off. Otherwise, good work.


Thanks m8!

And thanks for notifying me of that. I'm glad you enjoyed! :twilightsmile:

6882903 gray comes in, " Natsu, stop lighting things on fire, that isn't going to get you a fanfic any faster."

Anon is a freaking idiot. I love Dashie so I'd totally go out with her :rainbowkiss:

Immaturity speaks as loud as teen hormones in this. Anon doesn't know Dash isn't a yo-yo for him to shove away just because he felt like it, and then pick back up when she gets a bit close again.

Kids will be kids, I suppose.

Great fic, although Dash seemed a bit OOC. She seems like the kind of person/pony that would get back up and find someone else to have a crush on. Sure, she could be embarrassed for a while, but not so depressed. Maybe Rarity or Pinkie Pie are like that.

Aside from that, the fic is pretty good, even though it's a tad bit rushed. Upvoted and faved! :pinkiehappy:

Well, this had a great ending.

Love the story! 4 out of 5 moustaches. :moustache: :moustache: :moustache: :moustache:
Might've gotten 5 if Anon was Soarin... just maybe. Seems a little bit rushed; that would've helped it towards the 5 moustache mark. Still love it though!!! :heart:


Thanks! I appreciate the generous donation of mustaches! :moustache:

needs more of the story or a sequel.

Great, now I have to cry

Karma is a bitch in this story. A bitch.


where's the rest of it??
This cant be all of it ;-;

SHIT!!!! is that it?!!!!!:facehoof:
this needs to have MOAR!!!!!!!:flutterrage:

I really liked the story.

Rainbow Dash is 3rd best equestria girl.


Thank you! I'll put a link to the reading in the description of the story! :pinkiehappy:

You know this could really use a sequel. Just saying.

Dude that hurt my feelings when I read it.😔😩

It cant end like that........ this needs another chapter or a sequel

It ends like that? But we still have a lot of questions:applecry:

This is a great story but I would like to see a sequel to this story :applecry:

Plot twist: turns out after Anon denied her a year ago, she ends up dating Soarin; Those two are happy, but Anon is crushed.

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