• Published 2nd Oct 2015
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Coffee with a Hint of Lemon - icecreammac



Twilight Sparkle meets a former classmate and realizes the importance of forgiveness and friendship.

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Coffee with a Hint of Lemon

The school bell rang, and everyone began gathering their things to go home. Twilight Sparkle was one of the last students to leave the classroom, double- and triple-checking that her notes for the class were in order. Sure, she already knew most of today's lesson, but that was no excuse to be disorganized.

As she arrived at her locker, she was greeted by her new friend Sunset Shimmer. They began chatting as Twilight started grabbing her things.

"Hey, Twilight. How'd you like your first week at Canterlot High?"

"Oh, hello, Sunset. This week was great! No one teased me or bullied me or anything. Everyone was so helpful. Well, mostly everyone. People are still giving me looks for that...incident during the Friendship Games, but for the most part, the other students seem willing to forgive me."

"I wish they were that generous with me," Sunset mumbled.

"What was that?"

"Oh, nothing," Sunset stuttered. They began walking to the school's exit as Sunset tried to think of a way to change the subject. "So, uh, how were the classes? They challenging you any?"

Twilight started fiddling with her hair as she said, "Oh, you know, they're...you know..."

"That easy, huh?"

Twilight sighed and stopped walking. "Yeah; Crystal Prep had a much more advanced curriculum, so I already learned what we're going through at Canterlot High. I just don't want everyone else knowing that. They might think I'm some know-it-all snob."

Sunset smiled warmly as they resumed walking. "I wouldn't worry about that. People here won't think you're a know-it-all, Twilight. If anything, they'll be glad to know that you know all this stuff. It'll give them someone to go to when they need help with their work. In fact, you could tutor, if you want. You'd get to help people learn, and you get a bit of cash."

"I never thought of tutoring. No one at Crystal Prep would go anywhere near me, let alone ask for my help. Or anyone else's, for that matter."

"I'd consider it, if I were you. I tutor every once in a while, and it really is a good way to help students out and make new friends."

"That sounds nice. Thanks, Sunset," Twilight said as they arrived at the school's exit.

"No problem. By the way, the girls and I are getting together at Pinkie's tonight. You wanna join?"

"Oh, uh, no thanks. I have a test this Monday, so I should study. Plus, I have to plan out a tutoring schedule in case I do decide to tutor. Then, I need to study Spike; he's still talking, and I want to study the structure of his mouth and throat. So, yeah, I'll be kinda busy this weekend."

Sunset chuckled, "Wow, you really do remind me of the other Twilight. Alright, if you're sure, I'll see you Monday."

"See you."

Twilight and Sunset parted ways. Sunset went off to join the rest of their friends for another boisterous Pinkie Pie party. Twilight headed towards her home, alone.

It was a nice spring day. The sun was shining, and all was in bloom. Although enough of winter’s cold remained that Twilight slightly regretted wearing a short-sleeved blouse and a skirt, but it was a pleasant chill. It was a pleasant chill for the moment, but Twilight would need to take care to make it home before sunset. Twilight enjoyed the weather as she walked home, taking only a slight detour to go to her favorite coffee shop.

Twilight first found the shop, called Beans & Blends, completely by accident. Rain was coming down hard that day, and she decided to duck in and wait for the storm to clear. She ended up liking the cozy atmosphere, speedy service, and friendly staff, so she came more often. Best of all, the shop was small enough and far enough away from Crystal Prep that she never really saw any other students there.

She walked up to the counter and ordered her usual, a hazelnut latte, and took her customary seat in the far corner of the shop.

As she enjoyed her latte, she started going over her plans for the weekend, thinking about study schedules with students she might tutor and what rates she should charge. She kept this train of thought until she heard the bell over the front door ring. Twilight instinctively turned her head toward the door, and her eyes widened in shock.

Lemon Zest stood in the doorway of the shop, her headphones around her neck, her lime-green hair blowing in the wind as the warmer air of the shop pushed past it to reach the cooler air outside. She looked around for a bit, then started to walk to the counter.

Twilight, in the meantime, did her best to make herself appear as small as possible, hiding behind a textbook she pulled from her backpack. What is Lemon doing here? Beans & Blends is kind of out of the way for Crystal Prep students to be coming here. And besides that, Beans & Blends is my haven. It isn't fair that I have to deal with any of them here.

Twilight watched as Lemon grabbed her drink and turned away from the counter, hoping the whole time that Lemon wouldn't stay long. However, Twilight's dread quickly became a reality; Lemon noticed the weird bookworm in the corner, her eyes widening in recognition.

Lemon walked over to Twilight's table. "Twilight Sparkle?"

Twilight flinched and surfaced from the safety of her book-shield. "Y-Yes?" she stuttered.

"What are you doing here?" It wasn't a demand, just a simple question.

"Oh, you know, I just saw this place as I was walking home and, you know, uh, decided to give it a try," Twilight stammered, trying, and failing, to giggle nonchalantly at the end. Instead, her giggle sounded decidedly nervous. "So, uh, what're you doing here?"

Lemon Zest raised her eyebrow at Twilight's answer, but answered nonetheless, "I had to go pick up some new CDs, but the only store that carried them was pretty far from home. I thought I'd pop in a nearby coffee shop to get something to drink for the walk home."

They both stayed in uncomfortable silence for a few seconds, before Lemon asked, "Um, can I...sit down here?"

Twilight really didn't want her to, but was afraid of what Lemon might do if she refused, so she reluctantly said, "Uh, yeah, sure."

Lemon mumbled her thanks and sat down, suddenly looking somewhat nervous. "So, uh, how's your new school?" she asked. Twilight noticed how Lemon avoided actually saying the school's name.

"It's great. Canterlot High welcomed me with open arms, which is more than I can say for any single day at Crystal Prep," Twilight replied, perhaps more harshly than she intended.

Surprisingly, Lemon flinched at Twilight's words. "Uh, yeah," she said. "Principal Cinch isn't happy that you left."

"I don't expect her to be," Twilight replied. "After all, imagine the damage it could do to her precious reputation if people knew she lost such a good student," Twilight snapped, for once not worried about singing her praises. By this point, she was getting pretty impatient with Lemon and wanted her to just leave.

"Uh, yeah," Lemon said again. "Listen, I, uh, want to, uh, apologize. I'm...I'm sorry, Twilight."

Twilight was irritated. Now, she was angry. "You're sorry?" she repeated. "You're sorry? Do you have any idea what you and all the others put me through? I used to love going to school. It used to be my favorite part of the day, but because of all of you, I hated school. I hated getting up in the morning, I hated the morning walk to school, and I hated dealing with all the other students, and it was all because of you all!" She glared straight into Lemon's eyes as she finished speaking.

Lemon, who had been shrinking in her seat since Twilight began speaking, decided to risk saying, "I know. I know we've been terrible to you. We should never have done that. But, after we saw what you became after releasing that magic, I don't know, it was like we saw the culmination of all that we did to you floating before us. It was scary." Lemon began tearing up, her voice starting to stutter. "I-I thought I was going to die, and I realized that maybe...it was partly my fault. It's not like I was any easier on you than anyone else. I realize now that I shouldn't have done all I did. Twilight, please, I'm sorry. Please forgive me!" Tears streamed down her cheeks, dampening the earpads on her headphones. Their conversation had gotten the attention of some of the other patrons, but they looked away uncomfortably after Lemon's tear-filled apology.

I don't know what to do here, Twilight thought. On the one hand, I think I should be happy about Lemon being so sad. After all, Lemon and the others really made my life hard. Twilight's expression softened, however, when she really took in Lemon's tears. On the other hand, though, it's kinda hard to stay angry with her like this. Her tears seem far too honest. Making up her mind, Twilight gently put her hand on Lemon's, getting the other girl's attention.

"Uh, Lemon, um, you weren't all bad," Twilight said, trying to comfort the crying girl. "Sometimes, you were kinda nice. I mean, you've always seemed eager to share your music with me, even though it's not really my type," she continued, remembering when Lemon tried to share her headphones with Twilight on the bus to the Friendship Games. That certainly wasn't the first time Lemon tried.

"But, I was still mean to you with everyone else."

"Exactly. You were mean to me with everyone else. When you were alone, you left me pretty much alone, which was fine by me. Trust me, I know all about what peer pressure can do," Twilight said, looking down guiltily as she finished.

They both sat in guilty silence until Lemon spoke up, saying, "So, uh, do you...forgive me?"

Twilight stayed silent for a moment before saying, "I...I think I can give you another chance. Yeah, I forgive you."

Lemon gave her a teary smile. "Thank you, Twilight. Um, so about those CDs I talked about earlier. Do you wanna listen?" She pulled out some CD cases, still wrapped in plastic.

Twilight thought for a moment, when she grinned. "Actually, I think I have a better idea on how best to test those CDs. Do you want to meet the rest of my friends?"

Lemon looked nervous. "But, they're from Canterlot High. I thought they hated Crystal Prep students."

Twilight didn't miss how Lemon used the school's name this time. Smiling, she said, "Don't worry, I'll vouch for you. They're really easy to get along with."

Lemon thought about it, then said, "Yeah, sure. That sounds kinda fun. Just let me tell my folks."

Twilight nodded and did the same. When she was finished, she texted Sunset, typing,

I changed my mind. I am coming over, after all. I am bringing some good news with me.

That finished, Twilight and Lemon left toward Pinkie Pie's house, both noticing how the weather had warmed up during their conversation. Together, they walked side-by-side into the pleasantly warm afternoon.

Comments ( 59 )

I'm curious as to why you chose Lemon Zest specifically for this apology story. If anyone, it should be Sour Sweet having this heart-to-heart with Twilight. Out of all of the Shadowbolts, she's the one who gave Twilight the hardest time. The scene still works, and it would probably work with any of the Shadowbolts. But I dunno, choosing Lemon Zest seems a bit arbitrary. :applejackunsure:

With that aside, this was a nice story, and I'd personally like to see more of this concept. The Crystal Prep Shadowbolts are characters in desperate need of fleshing out, and having them express their remorse for pressuring Twilight into unleashing her magic is a good jumping off point. :twilightsmile:

Sequel! Sequel! Sequel! Sequel! Sequel! Sequel! Sequel! :pinkiehappy:

Please. And with the other Shadowbolts.

6485229 Sour Sweet was a close second to Lemon Zest. When I was thinking this up, I don't know, I kept going to Lemon Zest. Sour Sweet did give Twilight the hardest time from what we've seen, it's true. I think that's why I didn't go with her; it seemed like after all the post-disaster jitters left, she'd have a more difficult time coming right out and apologizing, especially during a chance encounter, of all things. Lemon Zest, on the other hand, didn't seem to hold too much resentment to Twilight, and so would have an easier time apologizing. It just seemed more natural to me. Plus, I don't think I'm quite good enough yet at writing to tackle Sour Sweet's personality without botching it. I hope that all makes sense, and I'm glad you like the story :twilightsmile:.

6485231 I was only planning on this being a one-shot, but I might come back to it if the mood takes me. I'm glad you liked it :pinkiesmile:!

Nice little story. :raritywink:

If you'e interested in some feedback, I have some. :twilightsmile: I'd redommend two things above all else: self-edit if you aren't already and also find someone else too. That'll help root occasional typos. Fortunately, I didn't see too many in here as is.
The other thing would be the classic case of show v. tell. For example, instead of saying "she was crying now," try describing it. Say what her face looked like, or if a tear rolled down her cheek, or if she broke down suddenly or just cried silently. Things like that always help out a story.

And Lemon Zest is zestiest pony! I added this story to her group by the way,

6485692 Thanks greatly for the feedback. I'll keep it in mind for future stories I'll go back through and iron out them typos. I'll do a bit of editing as well, trying to take care of the show v. tell thing. Also, I don't mind at all that you added it to the group. I'm glad you did!

6485713 Anytime! :pinkiehappy:

Comment posted by RNBW deleted Oct 3rd, 2015

6485720 Man, I'm glad you told me about those typos. There were more than I thought! I'll have to pay more attention next time :twilightsheepish:. I also altered a bit of the text to try to show more and tell less. I hope it reads better now.

6485737 There seems to be something wrong with the image. It's not showing when I click the link or open it in a new tab. I get a 404 error.

Vinyl and Lemon could be great friends:)

6485846
Here. A picture of the most awesome duo.
i.imgur.com/BYDknqu.png

6486162 Okay, that image works. I do like Indigo Zap. I wish the Shadowbolts in general got more screentime.

6486175
Yeah. Don't forget about Lemon Zest and Sour Sweet.

6486179 Oh, I'm sure I remember Lemon Zest and Sour Sweet.

I loved it!!!
It was really sweet.

I hope there might be a continuation some day.

Very nice little story that I would really like to see more of.

6487487 6487306 Thanks, you two! I might end up doing more stories in this continuum (where Lemon is friends with Twilight and her friends).

6487551 YEESSS!!!!!!
Will the other Shadowbolts make an appearance?

6487852 If I go along with more stories? In all likelihood, they'd appear. Not sure if I'd add them to the "friends list" right away, or work more on building the relationships between Lemon and the main cast first, though.

6487895 I think that sound like a good idea to focus on one friend at a time.

6488041 Good to know. I figured it would be, as well. If I rush all the redemptions, they start to lose their emotional impact.

Nice story, though I'm a little confused as to why you chose Lemon Zest over the other Shadowbolts, like Sour Sweet?

6488047 I'll be hoping for a sequel!

6488448 Thanks! I explained my reasoning in an earlier comment, but to wit: she seemed to make the most sense to me, since she was the lightest on Twilight in the movie. It seemed she'd be more willing to come right out and apologize than the others would be.

6488684 I agree, out of all of them, Lemon was the one who didn't seem to bother with Twilight.

Out of all of them, Lemon Zest was the one who was nicest to Twilight. From what I recall of the movie Sunny Flare didn't interact with Twilight at all as an individual. Sugar Coat and Sour Sweet had the most interaction with her and they were pretty horrible (granted, it seemed that they were like that with everyone). Indigo Zap seemed to try an get Twilight excited for the games on the bus, but due to her "lack of team spirit", as the official bios go, she may have just wanted everyone to give their all so she could win. Though the ending established that Cinch was a poisonous influence on both them and the entire school, as well as the fact that the Shadowbolts took responsibility for their actions that lead to Midnight Sparkle.

6492074 I agree that she was overall the nicest of the five, which was one of the reasons I chose her. There were some assumptions I made, such as her joining the crowd when they started pushing Twilight around. After all, it was shown that no one was backing Twilight in any of her events. That said, Lemon's attitude seemed like she'd have the easiest time apologizing out of the blue like this. Sorry if I rambled, but I wasn't sure if you were giving an argument about how Lemon Zest didn't make much sense in the story or if you were giving a general comment :twilightsheepish:. One of the problems with technological communication.

6492527
It was a bit of both. I can see them all eventually apologizing to Twilight, once they've had time to process everything that happened, but it does make sense that Lemon Zest would do it first.

6493930 I felt the same way. I'm not sure if I should do a chapter on the get-together at Pinkie's or handle it via flashback in future stories. It probably wouldn't be good for its own story, given how it follows immediately after this story, and I think the story ended nicely enough that continuing with a second chapter may be an injustice. I'm probably going to allude to the hangout in future stories via flashback, since the girls' interactions with Lemon are pretty important. What do you think?

6494041
I think it best to do it in a separate story. You are correct that this story ended on a good note and does not need a second chapter.

6494172 I appreciate your comment. If anything, I'd first do a sequel dealing with the hangout. Not sure if it'll be the start (or second story) of a series of one-shots or a larger story. Quite frankly, I'd prefer a series of one-shots. That way, I can write what comes to mind when it comes to mind.

I wish all the rest of the shadowbolt could apologize to twilight for the way they treated her

6498420 It depends on whether or not I want to continue this train, really. I'm actually leaning toward doing so, and have been trying to think of how to handle the get-together mentioned in this story. I'd like to develop Lemon's relationship with the girls before getting the other Shadowbolts involved.

That was cute in a friendship way.. Dunno about human Celestia letting Twilight off with her studies that easy though. if she's anything like Princess Celestia... She's find lots of ways to challenge human Twilight...:twilightsmile:

6503542 The curriculum is the curriculum. Twilight could still be in the Honors classes, but I don't think it'd be too far a stretch to say those would be easy for someone as studious as Twilight. I'm glad you liked the story! :twilightsmile:

6503918 Trrue but she might find it harder than she thinking..

Mmm... delicious zesty goodness. I do so love it when people are willing to add character to the Shadowbolts, something which the movie seemed a bit lacking in. Good read, and I'd be most interested in seeing how the two schools get on from here. :twilightsmile:

6526979 Thanks very much! I'm also bummed that the movies really didn't give much character to the Shadowbolts. I'm thinking about doing a few stories following this up, but I'd like to wait a bit before publishing them so that 1) it doesn't seem like I'm just churning out stories, and 2) so I can give each story the work it needs to stand out.

A sweet tale, and I understand your reasoning for having Lemon Zest be the first to offer an olive branch. I agree, however, any follow-ups should take the slow path with it; have Lemon interact with the girls at CHS and get to know them, and maybe through her, gradually bring in the rest of the Crystal Prep Five.

I'd argue that Indigo Zap should be the next to try and make amends, though, but that's just me.

6622677 Thanks for the kind words. I'm glad you feel the same way I do regarding the pacing of future stories. To be honest, I really don't know which Shadowbolt to go with next. I'll have to think about that bridge when I get close, though. I have the next story planned, and I have to get throught that, first.

6622818 I understand, and can appreciate it. Sorta wish my mind worked like that, but alas, once one idea gets started, six or seven more spring up alongside it.

6622869 I totally get what you mean. I have to force myself to think linearly.

6622893 Join the club. When I try working on tabletop rpgs, I always seem to get ideas for campaigns I'm not running. I've found having a text file to write the extra ideas down for another day helps...

Nice fic. Love to see the sequels. I could see Indigo's story having something to do with bumping into Dash while on a run and the two getting competitive to the point of exhaustion...

Just thought of the weird juxtaposition of Twilight's and Sunset's situations. At Crystal Prep, you had the student body oppressing one student. At CHS, you had one student oppressing the whole student body...

6624631 Glad you liked the story. I never noticed that juxtaposition. That's really interesting.

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