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mayorlight


mayorlight from DeviantArt and Derpibooru; Equestria Girls devotee

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When Lemon Zest needs help promoting her mother's real estate business, Indigo Zap agrees to give her a hand going door-to-door leaving door hangers.

Nothing a pair of Crystal Prep Shadowbolts can't handle!

Rated T for some language.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 9 )

Is it bad that I clicked this expecting a suicide? Probably.

Anyways, very slice of lifey. Nicely done

MJP

Read: Bad Rainbow Dash and Hyper headphones girls distribute door hangers

Indigo rolled her eyes and lifted the front of her skirt.
Lemon smiled as she gave a satisfied nod. "Okay, you're good!"

No monkeys here. :pinkiesmile:

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Hehe...I just had to include that ref to SoCHS! :rainbowwild:

8160228
Thank you. True, the title can sound a bit violent out of context. :derpytongue2:

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Oh, I hadn't caught that! :pinkiegasp:
...Does that mean Indigo sometimes just goes commando in this universe? :rainbowhuh:

It left me a little disappointed. There were some entertaining little scenes, but it also had some that could be better. Such as the scene where Indigo runs into that guy who just stares blankly at her. It felt like a set-up for something, but there was no pay-off. There was nothing really bad, but there are things that could be better.

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Sometimes. :pinkiesmile:

Usually when she has some mischief in mind.

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Thank you for your feedback. The encounters were direct rips of ones I've had going door to door. I considered adding a run-in with a dirty old man, but had a hard time keeping it in good taste.

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