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Hmmmmm... I am satisfied with how you did this...
Wait is the story ending now? Kinda short, so how long until Logan is forced to return and fix his mistakes?
thats fucking stupid we know the Sentinels can get to equestria and the pony's cant do jack shit to them how in the fuck are they going to 'Take care of her.'
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The sentinel was brought there by Alicia. They can't get there on their own.
7116272 The sentinel slaughtering villages was the one Alicia accidentally brought to Equestrian with her and Logan. There has been no sign that the Sentinels can get there on their own or even know of Equestrian's very existence.
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Called it. I knew there would be interference.
7116272 Imp/Alicia is the one that took them to equestria, on mistake. So no, they don't necessarily have/know how to reach her.
On the chapter, nice one. Sweetie Drops shows she can kick plot too, and the wombat demonstrates what an adamantium skeleton plus an ungodly healing factor can do. Quite loyal to the comics, I'd say.
Epilogue when?
Nice! Bonny you are a badass!!! Wolvie, you scare me, but you are too!
Lyra, where are you?
W-O-W....so far you avoided every possible cliche (not that a cliche, in this instance, would be bad) in this fic ! You truly surprised me !
I loved the binary veiws of the chapters
The X-Men can open a portal to that world.
And in chapter 3:
So Wolverine previously thought (probably correctly) that they could reach her even there, which means they could also slaughter all the ponies, since they couldn't even stand up to a single Sentinel. And now he just leaves her behind? Did he get that sick of the ponies?
Awesome chapter, I hope Bon Bon makes it though! :)
Well, now they just need some miracle to heal Bon-Bon's injuries, since she noted that no doctor in the world could heal what Wolverine did to her, and we can have a semi-happy ending.
On the Equestrian side, Imp settles down in her new home, with her new family. Celestia eventually recovers from her injuries, and is able to resume moving the sun. Maybe they'll even find the remains of the Sentinel and, after noticing that it had its own set of claws, deduce that Wolverine might not have been the one who wiped out all of those cities after all.
On Earth, Wolverine reports that Alicia has chosen to stay on that other world, and he figures that even if something does try to take her away, the family that she's chosen, one of which came pretty close to beating him in a one-on-one fight, will fight to the end to protect her. Then he'll probably ask Professor Xavier to erase all of his memories of Equestria. Xavier himself will judge that since only Alicia's power was strong enough to create a reliable method of traveling to Equestria, there should be little danger of the government or Magneto being able to find her, let alone get their hands on her.
I freakin call IT!!
*pull rope*
"I was right!"
I have no shame
7116339 the scary part is that wolverine adamantium skeleton is weakening his healing factor a lot
also I don't think none of the ponies under the princesses command will find any trace of the sentinel. pretty sure a third party beat them to it.
can be either a pony faction that after celestia defeat decided they needed something stronger to protect themselves or something to finish off the remaining princess and take the power for themselves or another nation in order to get a new weapon to take down equestria
7116272 We know one Sentinel got to Equestria. I'm willing to bet it got pulled in with Logan and Imp
Whoa, that was brutal! So Wolverine did end up winning, but when he saw that Imp would protect Bon Bon with her life, he just leaves her and actually asks Bon Bon to take care of her... Creating a whole bunch of feels at the end... Bravo man, bravo
7116272 you know, its kinda funny how every comment who responded to explain to you calmly why you were incorrect was down voted once, even the author responded and was down voted on their own story ... I have a feeling that person is you buddy... you don't seem to want to accept you were a little hasty in your assumption
I cant wait to read the part where twilight and the gang realize they have been tricked. But I'm pretty sure that rainbow bomb did it for us.
This was another great chapter, but I don't really know how to feel about the ending. After everything that happened, it ends in;
Again, it wasn't a bad ending, only... underwhelming. I was honestly expecting Nimrod (if that's who that was) to fix himself and show up again, maybe forcing Logan and Bonbon to fight him together. At least that's what I would have done, though, I doubt I could have portrayed Logan as well as you have.
However, what we got felt very real. I'm not sure what they said to each other, but I guess Logan realized she would be safe there.
I'm hoping that if this is wrapping up like it appears to be, we get a sequel. It would suck if this is all we get of this story.
P.S. How did his outfit regenerate when there was nothing left of it?
Logans happy with protectors, family, now he knows they got up to speed with how dangerous he was, and given the vortex, they know theres at least him, and if him at least another for him to fight against, even before interviewing the kiddy for details of so many bad guys after her.
Standard extreme healing is taken from plants, slime moulds etc, where the cells are totipotent, every one can grow into the whole being, but with Wolverine they really abuse the method, using what is effectively n dimentional alien tech and magic for the mutant powers.
That X-Factor ending doe...
Obvoous outcome.
Alice saving the day was expected but not unwelcomed.
And BonBon your record ends here, you said that you beat every creature that EQUESTRIA has to offer. Wolverine if from another world where they have to fight robots who constantly learn way to kill the mutants.
And her last weapon....
Bitch pls Wolverine can fully regenerate from a single blood cell, survived an atomic bomb. I only think that choking him or drowning might work but i still have my doubts.
Whoa I didn't expected this end. *applause to the author*
I wasn't expecting Bonbon to win but I didn't think Logan would successfully pull out lethal move.
But I'm glad how you settle things with Bonbon and Logan. I knew if he removed his mask the ponies could have a better reading of him. Though I really thought he would convince Alicia to come with him by telling her how things started on Earth (mostly did it here) and that her presence here might left the ponies in danger if they don't know how to teach her how to properly control her powers when she grows up.
Cause normally mutant have their powers appearing mostly around puberty. For Alicia to access them at five, she must be of the same category as Jean Grey.
I hope that it's not actually an end yet, 'cause really man, that would be not cool.
7116659 Nick Fury once pulled an experiment. He decapitated Wolverine, and put his head in vacuum. Logan was alive. It went along with lines that rather then simply regenerating, his cells were surviving.
Called it.
The super bomb blows his body away and it regrows, Imp stepping in (though I thought it would have happen sooner)
Even down to the "Honey Badger taking off his mask and talking to Imp/ bonbon is amazed he has face" scene.
Didn't call you having Wolverine just leave without at least trying to patch things up with the horses though.
7116296 KO awesome chapter, BEST fight ever and no died at the end so which means everything is alright for everyone.
Well now guess the ponies are going to be damn surprised when they get back to Imp, Bonbon, and Lyra. You know considering the `Murderous pure evil monster` showed up and while Bonbon got fucked up in all the worse ways. The girl is still there, Bonbon is still alive if in critical condition, and the `monster` has left the planet on its own.
I wonder if the ponies will find the pieces of Nimrod and learn the truth....then again I hope they don't find any parts, goodness knows how bad it will be if enough Sentinel tech is left behind for somepony to try and make their own. But oh well.
As for Logan seemingly regenerating from having no cells left, I think that is not the case since isn't his bones and claws only coated with Adamantium? So it means that within that nigh unbreakable shell of metal, he still got his bone and bone marrow. So there is a good chance that could be used to regen, but I'm guessing here.
Awesome Chapter all in all, can't wait to see what comes in the epilogue.
You don't think this is the end do you? A portal has been opened once. It can be again.
7116810 it's actually a feat replicated from the civil war comics if i remember correctly (i tried to read up on the story for the upcoming movies) where he gets attacked by a mutant that can create nuclear explosions or something like that. Anyway, the thing is that while his entire body was desteoyed, only leaving his skeleton behind, his brain was actually still intact, since his entire skull is adamantium coated, making it near impossible for any damage to penetrante his skull and do damage to it. So, as long as his brain is okay he can regenerate from there.
I think it was also stated somewhere that he needs to keep his brain intact, since without it he wouldn't be able to regenerate, but that's mostly going by random info (and death battle of course)
7113058
...Pay up.
7116577 is it the end though? knowing the author, his twin stories usually end around the same time and the wonder woman one has still a long way to go. but even without that fourth wall breaking knowledge, i strongly suspect that that isn't the end yet and something like this will happen:
after logan left, bonbon will become confused why logan left her alive, seeing as he's supposed to be this big bad uncaring killing machine. she then will start to re-examine the old material, noticing that with the newly acquired info things doesn't add up, and she will probably notice that there is a second being wracking havoc on equestrian. then, just as she realizes that, nimrod will show up and start attacking everything in his line of view. of course the ponies will try to fight it, but won't be able to figure the sentinel out, especially since it keeps adapting to situation and change tactics, acquiring and developing new powers along the way. they will battle for a while, until the ponies realize they have no chance against him and around that time bon-bon will remember imp's super haxor cheater teleport powers and send imp to fetch logan in the hope to stop the being ('he's the only being that ever defeated me, so he might be our only chance'). now, i'd like to see a few of the other x-men make an appearance, but, since this is the logan show, he will most likely come alone, at most accompanied by beast. they will fight, logan or beast will find out a way to defeat nimrod, and afterwards the ponies and the x-men will become friends, end of story.
that's the most likely outcome i can see for this story, giving the current situation. i might be off, but then again, there's no fun in already being able to predict everything that'S about to happen, so i would find it very welcoming if ono finds a way to surprise me^^
edit: about the ending of this chapter though, i don't rally thing it was bad or underwhelming. logan never rally cared for imp, all she ever was for him was a target assigned to him by charles, so his personal lack of interest in bringing her back isn't that surprising. and don't forget, the whole point of the mission was to find a place to keep imp save, and logan just witnessed firsthand how far the ponies would go to protect her, so he fulfilled his mission. there isn't really a reason for him to force her to come back.
7116810 Comic history: Wolverine has been blown up before leaving just his skeleton and he regened from that. He's also regenerated from just a drop of blood.
7116577 I was rather hoping for the team up against Nimrod, too. But I think Onomonopia knew he wrote himself too deeply into the corner with the insurmountable language barrier. Although, it would be good for Bon Bon or Luna to locate the remains of Nimrod and realize that it had been the one destroying the villages.
Besides, Logan had undeniably killed several ponies, even if they were individuals who had fought him--while he didn't wipe out whole towns, he certainly could've used less lethal force on them. After all, he partially dismembered Celestia! THAT's going to get a few folks rather irked at him, just by itself!! Even had there been a team up with Bon Bon, he'd have to answer to those crimes, and without a means to communicate, they'd still be left with no choice but to kill him.
Still, it was a great story!
7117001 on the condition you provide links to that abridge series.
7117290 OK, link below.
Muffin button.
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7116810
From the civil war series, in particular Wolverine's arc in it.
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7117053 So the only way to properly kill Wolverine is to destroy every cell that makes up his body. Fair enough, but if his skeleton is is covered by Adamantium, then how does the rest of him regenerate from it? And if there are gaps in the armour, then how did the magic fail to destroy all of him?
I do not understand this. All you need is for a source of destruction (heat, energy, magic, etc.) to get into the gaps and destroy his biological skeleton. Then he's done.
7117341 cool. Now what do you want to be payed in? Memes? Maybe a quote from the god of dankness? Take your pick, those aren't the only options, only the ones I put forward.
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Enope. As soon as his healing factor kicked in he'd be up again.
7116272
Two things wrong with what you said
One: Alicia brought the Sentinel, they can't get to Equestria unless they have something to lock on to, the broken Sentinel won't work because there's no part of it on Earth to use as a focus. Wolcerine was able to be locked onto because his DNA is almost everywhere on Earth. They MIGHT be able to use Alicia as a Focus IF they find her DNA, which they can't
Two: They have no reason to go to Equestria eccept for Alicia, who disappwared and they don't know where she went.
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Read above; Wolverine ASSUMES they can get to her.
7116659
His healing factor has revived him before when he's driwned. Wolverine even says so in this story.
Gotta admit, disappointed with the way this ended. Hopefully we're not close to the end? They still haven't figured out that Wolverine's mostly innocent anyway.
7117862 Derpys.
7116915 Yeah. Logan has a special organ in the base of his cerebral cortex (AKA bottom of the brain) which contains his entire genetic code. It's what realizes damage and commands the body to repair itself. As long as that's intact, he's basically immortal. Though, there are ways around it. Obviously, if his skull is heated enough, then basic convection will see to it that his soft brain tissues die out, and thus the regeneration organ. And if he drowns, then his brain will eventually become clogged with water, and thus the regeneration organ will become clogged, and you can do the math.
Hmmmm... yeah, it ain't over yet... I think there's some explanations in order, and then some.
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The way the magic stopped his healing factor was by tricking his body into thinking it wasn't hurt.
You can't trick a body into thinking it's alive. You can't trick a body into thinking it's not hurt if there's no nervous system.
Pretty sure that magic shouldn't have worked anyway; it's not his nervous system that controls his healing factor.
I'm going to shut up now before I make more of an arse of myself.
Also, 2 downvotes on my comment. Nice. Pretty sure one's from leslie, the other's probably from you.
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Please consider the fact that I've taken into consideration what you've said and that I don't want to argue? Thank you.
7117929 How many? The right answer is, all of them.
7118534 Indubitably.
7118311 any of you guys even bother to read the title?
It's the X-factor! Prepare for Wolverine and heavy metal, Celestia singing I'm walking on sunshine, spitfire is an extra in Luna's 'thriller', don't forget twilight's 'white and nerdy' cover (she dyed), Bon Bon's got a sweet tooth is on after that follow by Lyra with liar liar, and so much more! Are there any more acts I'm forgetting?