Starlight Glimmer creates 4 velociraptors named Blue, Delta, Charlie, and Echo to help with her equalization of equestria. But when the mane six free the village, the raptors believe starlight to be dead and seek new loyalty. This is their story. (There may be some minor gore at points in the story so I added the gore icon just to be safe.)
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You have my interest
6407552 Trust me it will be getting a lot more interesting from this point.
6408418 Can't wait!
Nice picture
what happened to the other picture it was cute...
Where did you get that cute picture anyway? Can you send me the link?
6408860 The only reason a took it off because I was going to get in trouble with the creator for copyright bullcrap. Also they didn't look accurate to what they look like in the story. Nether the less, the original image is here : https://41.media.tumblr.com/79497badf126406a961908fa81b5b97f/tumblr_nrfih9Ngn21rn72mxo1_500.png . I hope this change doesn't distract from the story. They did look cute though
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6408959 Thanks!
but thats what people love about the velociraptors
6412337 Don't worry, lets just say not everypony will be ok in the end
when is the next chapter
6435492 I'll try to get it out by tonight. Thanks for asking
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no problem glad to just support the cause
6438507 Much appreciated!
I've noticed you have not posted in a while is this because of school?
6447605 CORRECT I'm actually halfway done with the next chapter. I'll most likely get it out in the next few days. It might even be out by tonight if I'm feeling up for it. It's nice to see people look forward to seeing my work
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what can I say people love the Jurassic world raptors
pretty good cant wait to see how the raptors alpha will be next
6448268 Oh trust me its someone you'd least expect
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ultron :0
6448490 Lets just say its someone very close to the Mane Six
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you almost done with the next page (place name here)
6458409 I'm still working on it. This next one will be echo's special chapter
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ah ok cool
you close to finishing yet?:)
6471604 Just about
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very short but still love the story and the raptors
Channel didn't show up. Went to a "Channel does not exist" page.
6595139 Darn! The next best way is to search Koby Romigh on youtube. My channel should be the first thing that comes up. sorry for the faulty link
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Great story so far.
good job and keep up the good work.
6596142 Thanks
6596198
You are welcome.
Well i must say that i have seen people using the same technique before but hey i liked it.
Now good job and keep up the good story you are making.
6603557 Thanks but I what do you mean by technique?
6607093 What i mean is the picture on the background.
Don't take it to seriously though.
6607544 It's fine
! I just didn't know what you were talking about.
6607860 Hey no hard feelings.
now don't let your awesome story waiting.
Thats a nice little teaser you got there. Please continue zis story.
7248130 Unfortunately I've lost interest in writing this story. However I have another JW crossover planned. You can find the trailer here...https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=I2qZZY_Hs6c