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How does this crossover even work!?
Damnit now I have to read to see how you pulled this one off. Description sounds really interesting too.
>A MLP
an.
AN MLP story.
@Texxy>>995213
Hmm?
995224
You wrote "A MLP story" in the title.
You want to write "An MLP Story"
I like it!
Sorry but now the two greatest series that I love is now ruined.....
HI KIIIIIIIDS
watch list :3
detailed, i'll give ya that much.
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I didn't write this to ruin both series. I'm just writing it to be creative.
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I've been planning this story for months and it tooks alot of rewrites to make this story interesting. Besides, no one has ever done a Twisted Metal/MLP X-Over so I maybe the first to do it
why does this story have so many dislikes? i mean, sure. there are some grammar errors but everything else is fine!
1044094
I guess the ones who dislike this story were expecting to see Sweet Tooth...but...he hasn't shown up yet. Yes, he's in it but I'm busy writing more chapters for this story and my other fic.
As for the dislikes, I can care less.
1044094
Or maybe everyone hates Twisted Metal. IDK.
Alright guys! I'm back after a long hiatus due to personal problems outside the net. Expect another chapter soon.
Ohh I've always thought about Sweet Tooth making it somewhere more... fitting of his clown persona. There is something particularly frightening and badass about him, oh and it would be a treat to see him burn the whole damn kingdom to the ground.
I see all these downvotes coming from a grammatical perspective. There is defenitly room to improve and it wouldn't be a bad idea to grab an editor.
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It is confirmed that Sweet Tooth is in it but you have to wait for that happen.
As for the dislikes, it's not because of the grammar errors. It's because that everyone thinks that a Twisted Metal/MLP:FiM crossover sounds stupid but NO ONE has ever done one and I'm the first one to actually write one.
its good so far i wonder y most people disliked it
u know the people who disliked this can shove their dislikes up their ass this is an awesome story
What that guy said 22 weeks ago. It should be "An MLP story". I know you may be thinking "but there's no vowel" but if the word after the a starts with a letter that sounds like a vowel (in this case m= EMM phonetically) then you need to change it to AN.
beautiful story i like it and keep up the good work and im glad u r feeling better
holy shit good chapter im sorry for your losses
1566889 Because it's not good.
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Discentia has left her domain of Reddit to hit this fic with the Hammer of Internet Smiting.
2408457
Like I said before in previous posts, everyone thinks that a crossover with Twisted Metal and MLP: FiM sounds stupid and gave this story so many dislikes. You have over 1,000 crossover fics with MLP mixed with popular games like Halo, Gears of War, Uncharted, Final Fantasy and such. However, when was there ever a story involving Twisted Metal? None. I'm the first person to do this and I've been planning, outlining, and rewriting this story for months on how I want it to be written.
If this is Twisted Metal, where is Sweet Tooth? Is he in the story? When does he show up? '
Yes, he's in it. You have to wait until he shows up.
As for dislikes, I can care less.
2408602 Well, since I don't understand the crossover material in the first place, sure.
I did not like the main character, as he felt like a flat, rather boring person. I place a big emphasis on characters.
However, you should pay some attention to downvotes. Yes, some subjects get spontaneous votes.
I write a Fallout: Equestria HiE sidefic. Two subjects that gather instant downvotes, especially that last one. Yet I have a 10:1 upvote/downvote ratio. Only one of ten people disliked. This is due to readers enjoying my characters, settings, situations, and overall story-line.
Since I have yet to receive a "negative" comment, I can assume that the downvotes came from my genre.
However, your fic has a 1:3 upvote/downvote ratio. for every person that upvoted, three downvoted. You can't blame genre for that. That's people responding to the quality of the story.
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The character, Senshi Daniels, was originally created from a Star Fox fanfic that never got made in 2010. Instead of a stock car/Twisted Metal driver, my character was an ex-Marine turned Air Force pilot leading his team of other pilots to stop a global terrorist organization, called the Broken Legion Of Order Dishonor Society (aka The BLOODS). The BLOODS create an interdimensional portal that can be used to destroy major cities but Daniels ends up going through via mistake and ends up in the Lylat System. There, he meets the characters from Star Fox and decides to help them battle Andrew Oikonny's and his plans of domination.
Everything was planned and outline...but then I noticed that there are over 1,000 Star Fox/Human fanfics involving soldiers and pilots and to me, it's going to be tough for this fanfic to be a hit. So therefore, it was cancelled but I did not want to lose my character and kept him shelved for a long period.
In 2012, two things happened: I became a brony and Twisted Metal 2012 for the PS3 was released. When I got finished with Twisted Metal and around the time when MLP season 2 was still on the air, my ideas for fanfictions began to develop and I asked myself
"I see a bunch of MLP crossovers involving Halo, Gears, Borderlands, Uncharted, Red vs Blue, Call of Duty; etc....but...did anyone did Twisted Metal? Doesn't look like it. So, I write one."
However, one problem: who's going to be the main character? Twisted Metal only has three characters that appeared in more games than anyone else: Sweet Tooth, Calypso, and Mr. Grimm. None of these three are suitable to be the main character since you have a serial killer, a demon, and a grim reaper with their own motives. That's when I thought about Senshi Daniels, the character I shelved a long time ago, and brought him back with a new backstory and occupation.
So what is the situation, setting, storyline, and motivation that's happening with Senshi Daniels?
As stated before in the beginning of the story, Senshi Daniels is arrested by the LAPD because they believed he murdered Calypso. However, he claims he didn't as he tells the story through narration and flashbacks in his perspective that happened 8 weeks ago that lead to his disappearence and what was the fate of Calypso. His motivation was to find his sister, Stacy, who vanished as she competed in the previous tournament. Senshi ends up in Equestria after stealing Calpyso's ring but does not understand why and that's when the main focus of this story begins to pick up steam in later chapters. So right now, the fic is just developing.
2408457 fuck u this is the shit right here
2427977
See, your comment is almost right. Let's try a quick edit.
Now I agree with you completely.
2412367 Well, I applaud the effort you've made into making this work. But, while this certainly isn't set in stone, not everything can be crossed over with MLP. Some things just do not mesh with the MLP world.
2444271 sorry but nnope this is the best stuff here
2447862 But sadly, you are not best troll.
That title belongs to Regidar.
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2447862
No fighting on my page please. I'm giving you both a warning.
... I like this fic...
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I'm glad you do. thanks
update plz I love this fic
2444290 There are many cross over fictions in this sit that are sh** but they get tons of likes because people are too stupid. I once saw a Star Wars cross over that has an error on almost every word and is rushed. Guess what people, many people gave it a thumbs up.
5552240 Bud, that comment's more than a year old
5560794 So that means I can't reply to your comment?
5561915 Means that I'll receive a notification for a comment I made more than a year ago, by which time I'd have long forgotten any context surrounding the comment or why I made it.
It's just a very odd thing to do. Like going on a forum that hasn't been posted on in a year and just randomly replying to people.
5570301 Hmmm, I get it. Sorry for disturbing you then.
Is this story dead or alive ?