The tale of Equestria's long and epic history is recorded here. Starting from the very beginning we see how this great nation and the world in which it is placed came to be. History is not always pretty but it is important. It begins with the first two beings and the first alicorn line. The story of how each individual has helped to shape this world into what it is. This is the story of how we came to be. This is The Genesis of Equestria.
This already sounds good.
*how
6321678 Heh thank for pointing that out ^-^
6321686 Yep
Very good beginning!
At first I was stumped by numbers in the text, but now I think I understood their meaning.
Here goes this story's first upvote)