Three colts are missing in the Everfree Forest. An ambitious and driven Manehattan detective teams up with the enigmatic and mysterious Zecora to solve the mystery while an evil stranger stalks them in the shadows.
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Ammie Kindheart
New to the Equestrian world myself but aquainted a bit through my love, and RL husband, Pononimous. I love reading, cooking, music and writing now and then.
Ammie Kindheart
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Great read
Gets better after I read it again keep up the great work
Thanks! And thanks for the muffin too
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This's truly awesome, honey! Such a great start to a great story. You're AWESOME!
Great job
Um sorry I'll be going now
Flutters demands MORE:flutter-rage ..um..if you d-don't mind...
~Derpy could you handle this plz..
Sure ..um fluttershy I think I saw Angel run off ...
Oh No .. Why is he always doing this ..
~ Ugh stills wont lets meh thumbs ups
Admin needs to fix dis
6300502 too cute. Thanks
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Oh, man! The rewrite is awesome, baby! Wonderful! Beautiful! I love it! Looking forward to more.
~ Got to say this second draft ( update) is spectacular
my daughter Eve absolutely loved it and so did I
~: ask her when the next chapter comes out daddy
~ ok sweetheart I will, do you want to say hi to the nice lady ?
~: hi I'm Eve ,I'm eight years old ,it so nice to meet you ..sorta..um. when does the next chapter come out .??
~ok Eve why don't you go find the CMC and go play outside .. It's a beautiful day
~: ok daddy Bye Mrs Kindheart
~ hehe kids ....always so energetic and full of life yet completely oblivious to the harsh realities of life .. Ignorance is bliss no ?
6322634 Cute little one there. Thanks. Chapter 2 will go up in a couple days, I think.
6323045 ~every time I read this it gets better , keep up the good work
Thanks!
6343513 psssst thanks!
This is truly awesome, honey! You've got Zecora down to a tee! Wonderful story! I love it!
6343771 Thanks babe, that means so much!
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You're welcome, sweetheart. You're an awesome writer in your own right and it shows in your work.
~ this was great , it had Eve on the edge of her seat when I read it to her ... Wat a cliffhanger
Link to video incase you can't see it...
6345368 Cool, thanks
Ooh, I liked this part! Wonderfully done, sweetheart!
6366082 thanks babe
~ eve just ate this story up and now won't go to sleep with all her questions ..... Good read we can't wait for more
6379767 Thanks. Pssst Eve go to sleep.
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This just keeps getting better and better! Great work, honey! I'm so proud of you!
6385098 Thanks babe, you're awesome.
~ oh the suspense tis killing meh
@Ammie Kindheart
Awesome, sweetheart! This just keeps gettting better and better!
6393666 Thanks babe, happy dance!
6393611 Heehee then it's working!
AWESOME! JUST AWESOME! I'm really getting into this. It's just too good!
6411176 Thanks babe! That makes my whole day!!
This is magnificent so far, And it's only the first chapter!
I am going to end this comment so that I can go read more. Thank you so much, Heart mom, for sharing this wonderful story!
I'm loving this so far! Can't wait to see what happens next!
6414960 Thanks so much, and it's not even to the scary part yet heehee