• Member Since 27th Jul, 2012
  • offline last seen April 9th


Just a german pony, trying his hooves on fictional writing.


While helping with the research on a parasprite repellent, Rainbow Dash gets exposed to a sample of parasprite excrement.
In the following days, an investigation is started - involving bite marks all over Ponyville.
Does Twilight still have that Sherlock Holmes outfit? Will Pinkie Pie save the day? And is there any hope for Cider this season?

Big thanks and a brohoof go out to my editor Capitola. Have a look at his page: www.fimfiction.net/user/Capitola
Credit for the Cover goes to Lost-in-Equestria, over at deviantart.com

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 22 )

Excellent job, the first four chapters look great!

If you want to get your story more noticed I recommend you join as many groups as you can on this site and start submitting your story to them. It would attract attention to this amazing story!

OK then - I'll be off to spreadi the word around here! :scootangel:

Well, that title made me think this was going to be a MUCH different fic than it is. :rainbowderp:

I don't want to spoil anyone but let me say this:

The story has slime and will I reject any requests for Tentacles or anything related... :moustache:

I need to read some moar of this i think its funny XD

YUSH another chapter ^3^

Oh you're going to be mad about chapter 6 :trollestia:

Don't worry, I'll keep 'em coming.

Chapter 7 is coming along really good, meanwhile you could read the other chapters again - perhaps this time in James Earl Joneses voice ...

Okay Dokey Lokey..... :pinkiecrazy:

:pinkiesad2:LOLOLOLOLOLOL!!!!!!!!!!! Thats hilarious! Pinkies new contraption O_e:pinkiecrazy::pinkiegasp::pinkiehappy:

I dont understand what happend:rainbowhuh:

You've got me a little bit concerned there... If you'd like to discuss that pm me - I'm always grateful for feedback :twilightsheepish:

The final chapters are coming up, you're right.
I want to emphasize again, that I wouldn't have come this far without the editorial help of Capitola.
Ending the story after about ten chapters feels right, it's better to go out with a bang than to drag on the plot!

If you like my story, spread the word!

A quick update on my progress:
Chapter 8 is in the second round of editing, Chapter 9 currently consists of loose notes and Chapter 10 only exists in the back of my head.

//Edit: Dangabit - I always mix up his avatar and his screenname! Sorry Capitola!

Awwww what? :pinkiesad2: what do you mean 'approach it a different way'? You gonna rewrite this? Or a completely new story all together?

This is why I've vowed that if I ever write a multi-chapter fic I will not publish any of it until every chapter has been written, so I won't have a chance to end up disappointing all the people following it by leaving them on the edge of their seats and then abandoning it.


If anyone is interested in adopting this story, feel free to reply to this comment. We'll work something out.
I'm really sorry about this.


2135511 Dude! You gotta adopt this! if I do it'd never get finished! :facehoof:

If you don't want to finish it on your own....we could Collab it...

So they gained Dash's powers and stubbornness

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