Luna and Celestia have agreed that Luna needs to be more vocal in her feelings towards her sister. Well, by agreed this means Celestia pretty much ordered luna to write a ltter to her every month. Which of course, leads to Luna's current predicament and realization of what she wanted to say to her for all these years. Which comes from the help of an unlikely source.
One shot, not much of a premise for it. I just had this crazy thought of a dream and chose to write it up as best as I could before I forgot it.
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*sigh* It's a neat idea... But, it reads a bit difficulty. An example of this is having NMM speaking old Equestrian. She never did, that was a tick of Luna's. It also went far to fast. Slow down your pacing a bit. Put yourself in Luna or Celestia's shoes as it were. I truly do think this has the potential to be good it's just not there, yet. Also try and get an editor and or pre readers to help you out. They are always handy trust me!
Keep writing!
FE
Dear HeavensRaptor,
Fuck you and fuck this ending, I want more.
From General of the 5th Axian Elite,
Liensis Redshield Dynamo.
P.S: Still waiting a explanation of what that pineapple have to do with all of this.
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Well, for the premise of just waking up and writing it before I forgot it was pretty good. I could refine it into something better... but what better would I refine it? I am almost afraid of how to improve it. Although, I'm all eyes and ears on some suggestions for I am lacking on seeing how to improve it. Maybe later I'll do a bit of rewrite on it once I've had a chance to step away from it.
Thanks though!
Pre-readers or editors, list sum. A lot of people dislike editing or pre-reading anything that is not happy-go-lucky. I do not always do go-lucky and happy endings in writing.
Btw, Foals... your profile pic should be banned... the adorablness...
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So far... I have no explanation for the pineapple... lol!
Although, the ideas are almost endless... just brain-drained from writing a lot today. 
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<-- I'm just smug as all buck!
The pacing was quick as it was not a full delve perspective into the potentially harsh life of the two sisters. As far as Nightmare using 'Old Equestrian' there is a reason for that. The reason can be easily missed and I wrote it like that. You've already accomplished half the thought in that pattern though. Within your own comment no-less.
Thank you for your encouragement, it is a nice sentiment in this vast networks of death! I will look into re-writing it so the sentence structures may read a bit smoother. I have a tendency to make it a bit rough, something I should work on.
You keep on doing your things as well!
HR
P.s. I just copied you.
How were the changelings "entertaining" her?