I have nothing... therefore I am nothing. Revel in your darkness, for it is my light that made you blind. :3
Applejack is pushing along in age and her attraction to mares is no secret to her family. Although it is to her friends, but not for long when she finally confesses to a certain pegasus her affection. How will her blue friend take the news?
I chose to create the word 'Equisexual' as a means to Homosexual. Although Equisexual I feel could also play to the words as Equal sex, which could also have far more meaning than just attracted to the same-sex.
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It seems kind of cruel of Rainbow to lead AJ on like that. She clearly does know what her preferences are, from how definite she was about just not being attracted to mares. Intentionally giving AJ false hope to soften the pain of rejection will only end up hurting her worse when she's eventually forced to own up to it.
Also didn't see anything you'd need to invent new words for, as an aside.
Hoo boy, not just fan-fiction, but fan-fiction with an agenda. This will be fun.
I'm not sure what everyone's seeing that I don't, but I can't really find anything so offensive or blatantly preachy that it'd be a justification for all those downvotes.
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Oh no, the creating of the word is actually what lead me to the story... which maybe I should of stated that in the Notes or description. Just something that I was pondering about... I was actually trying to think of city names to make up... granted there are a lot of good ones out there. I just wanted to attempt to make something more original, granted some of the names I'll be using are not... most of them are not...
Although I do understand what you mean.
As far as Rainbow Dash seeming to lead Applejack on, I kind of, maybe, possibly left it a bit like that... I took a bit of my life experience when I was younger and threw it in there. If you have never met someone who lead you on and then later on felt... oh, hey... turns out I'm not straight or I'm not homosexual... it is a bit, dis-heartening... even soul crushing at some points... *stares into space... no place in particular* Anyways, yes, it is cruel and that is what life can be sometimes. Even if individuals did not intend it that way.
Thank you for the comments, though if you have any creative criticism or suggestions I'd love to hear them. The only way to grow is if you are willing to learn. Learning can also be through listening to what others have to say.
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Agenda? If it is story writing and a job, yes. If you meant by promoting equality for all attraction types and different genders. Like in pay or the likes... eh, I kind of already vote for Equality, something so simple yet so complex to some individuals.
Thank you all for who reads this and the story, even if it is not to your liking.
Oh, did I label is this correctly? I was unsure if I needed the Sad tag at all... I am unsure if it was exactly sad... need input, assist please!
Sincerely,
The noobish story teller - HeavensRaptor
this is quite good, although I have to agree with wlam on RainbowDash being quite cruel in this story
also you may want to add Big Macintosh and Granny Smith tags since both part of the story, while Twilight and AppleBloom are only mentioned
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Thanks, and... done.
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The fuck-
1. Don't ever use aye to replace I. I don't care if you use Ah, but fucking aye? You disgrace the word.
2. What the hell was up with that ending?
'I want your ass'
'oh- I dunno about that.'
'well I feel better for saying that'
'look at my ass'
'I regret saying that'
'can we still be awesome best friends?'
'as if I'd stop'
'let's go tell Twilight shit to write in her friendship report shit'
'okay.'
Being rejected is pretty sad, so that's not an issue. Running the story past a proofreader wouldn't hurt. Your writing is kinda clumsy in the technical sense and fixing the grammar and spelling issues would go a long way towards improving that. Rainbow being inconsiderate of other people's feelings and speaking without thinking of the possible consequences isn't actually a bad thing, because that's exactly how her character works and what she would do. Can't really criticize you for being good at writing her as intended.
Otherwise I don't really see any problems.
I would have dismissed this story as unimportant, and unnoticeable. But your usage of the made up word "equisexual" brought me here, to tell you that you are an idiot. That literally translates as "Sexual in relation to horses" and would imply being attracted to horses. Nothing to do with homosexuality in any way, which means "Sexual in relation to the same" implying attraction to the same gender.
In conclusion, die.
I'm sure any moment now I'll start giving a flying fuck and start being irrationally angry about it just like you.
Reading this, your fantasy level must be over 9000.
5475285 That is literally what I was thinking when I saw the title. At first I thought it was an 'Anon in Equestria' fic.
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Always that one violent butthurt individual in the comments :P
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It kinda still ends up being applicable, though, doesn't it? Also I think there is already a HiE story that uses a very similar name exactly because of that.
5475911 Uhh..no it doesn't as 5475285 said, it literally means sexually attracted to horses. In this case, it would be applicable with every. single. pony.
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When I say "agenda", I mean political. So, maybe?
It's a concept my high school history teacher introduced us to, and it's ruined every movie and book for me. It's some ratio between political content, and political message. Take the original Star Wars trilogy: they have very little of actual politics, but there's a strong political message. Inversely, there's the recent The Interview: it's all about politics, but has next-to no political message.
I'm not complaining about the message; I'm egalitarian myself, so we're idealogical kinsmen. I just get nervous when any kind of message looks... ham-handled, let's say. It's almost like propaganda, but without the finesse.
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It was a terribly forced, terrible play on words. One could play devil's advocate, and say that the made-up "Equisexual" doesn't strictly imply equiphilia. It's entirely feasible for one to have sexual relations with equines, while having an utter distaste for horses. Furthermore, I think an equiphalic horse (and also an anthrophillic human) could have the capacity to carry a homosexual relationship.
But that's neither here nor there. The title was dumb.
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To summarize a bit... I can't. I really just wrote this because my brain was at a stand-still and needed something to redirect. I thought the word I used/made was crafty... although some seem to hate it. 
I must admit... that made me laugh.
I'll take to note in later writings, use proper wording in the writing. Even though I would like to point out again, it was an attempt at having the reader, that is you, read the phrases in an accent. I am guessing by the amount of discussion... it was not successful.
Thank you for your input though!
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Thank you, I am glad I hit success on at least one character... granted Rainbow Dash is one of my favorites...
I feel as if I could of done better... but I, in truth, did not put too much conscious effort into creating this other than a single sitting and going... yay, this sounds nice and close to their characters!
Seems I may of done poorly with the Apple family, I shall work on that eventually though! Practice makes perfect!
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My... fantasy level... being over 9000, is that good? I hope so...
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I am sorry you do not approve of my word creation... although after reading your comment I did come to the conclusion you are fairly correct. With how it is spelt, Equisexual, it may pertain more to the Equine variety... and thus be somewhat moot. So I thought of a neat idea, the word could be repaired to be Equasexual... Which would then arrive at the words equal sex being horrifically combined. I really made it out of boredom, as I do believe I stated else where... It is just something to help get over my small motivational block I was having.
Regarding the Anon thing... you know... that could of been a good title for an Anon story. Know what, anyone who wants to write that go for it!
Apologies on my antics of false hope though, although I am glad it brought you here!
Regarding the end of your "Comment", I would ask and state as a matter of fact, that I shall not.
Do not post a comment of such negative stature on anyone's stories, blogs, or other media that you use. Stating your opinion on a matter is fine, even if it is a negative response. Although, if you take it a step further and wish harm to the individual it begins to turn into an entirely different world and conversation. That would be the equivalent of you going up to me in a public area and telling me you wish me dead or that you are going to kill me. I would indeed take that as you preparing to murder me, via how-ever means, and I would react in a self defense manner. Immediately.
You have been warned, do not do it again.
That is all I have to say on that matter, otherwise I feel you are entitled to speak as freely and with courtesy as any other sentient being.
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yeah, a little. 
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Agenda as in my own, yes. I totally understand what you are getting at with that, I hope.
I, by no means, attempted any proproganda... although if I made some that seems to work... hey, maybe I could get a job in it!
Doubtful.
Regarding both your comments, awesome, thanks for the feedback. Yeah, I do admit I made this story with short-sight and had no true plans for it. It was, and will always will be, one of the possible many stories I write without any real meaning or understanding just becuase I can. Sometimes my mind gets stuck and it gets unmotivated and I need to change it up. This was just one of the things that assisted in it... you know, give yourself a nice distraction sort of thing.
Although I did not intend on any actual traffic to it... in truth. LOL!
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So it's perfectly accurate. AJ is a lesbian, but she's a pony lesbian.
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No... no, in that context, it isn't.
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And sleep deprived... I could amend that statement I posted but... honestly I am not really interested in it. I thought it was a fun or clever word combination... though it seems I was wrong, oh well! 
I leave that to you to decide what you think of me. Although, I've not once claimed to be incredibly smart... maybe a smart-ass at times. Actually, you know what... I am smart... just with a reasonable amount of room for error.
*Goes back into hiding to write and read* Eeep!