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storiesatrandom


Hello, I'm Storiesatrandom, and, I, do stories..... At Random.

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Shining Armor has problems. Dealing with an incompident Grand Commander making the guards look like idiots that couldn't even protect the princesses from a plant, and the fact he's trying to force Twilight into marrying his good natured but kinda dim-witted nefpew Flash Sentry and to Force Celestia into approving it, even when it was obvious that Twilight is clearly more in love with Celestia. While planning to deal with the idiot eventally while returning home, Shining Armor returns to a surprise he would, never, forget.

Hey guys, guess who's back after a stupidly long Hiatus on these stories?!
I ran into alot of problems here. Fimfictions growing restrictions against spelling problems, my microsoft writer becoming unworkable with the Orange of death it has (it was a long outdated writer, it had like, the year 2010 on it), and me being over-all distracted with other things.
But I'm glad to be making stories again.
Thing is though, I actselly have ALOT more stories that came before this, but again, I can't release them in their current state that they would end up being rejected thanks to FIMfictions restrictions on troubled writing. It is not fair to mistreat people like that because some people like myself, who's mildly autistic, can't help but to write things that look like it came from pre-school. You shouldn't have the expection on people to be the Leonardo De Vithci of fanfics and expect every piece of work to be a masterpiece, or else you would be like the guys from Equestia Daily.

Anyway, enjoy the fic and the return of Lil' ol' me.

The Art is by Slypon.
Rated teen for certain references of sexual reference, but no actual talks of the act of sex, just the talk about the oriantation, but light talk of it.
Edited by Arcelia.

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Comments ( 2 )

While an interesting concept with Cadance, a lot of the idea in Shining Armor's issues seem majorly flawed. More than half the story seems to focus on the issue with Spear Point, which easily could be pointed out as something that would not be an issue from in-show set-up. It also seems like the entire story is just one massive info-dump with very little actually taking place in it. A lot of narrating what the problem is for Shining Armor and Cadance explaining her own without either really doing much.

6156783 Well it's mainly meant to be explanation into his problems so he and Candence can have a commen goal.

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