They're tired of mentors never telling them what they need to know. They're tired of always being expected to forgive others, no matter what. They're tired of always being the one who saves the day when the people they save aren't worth it.
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Which chapter did Rick first appeared in? I forgot
So far things are getting good. I still think the gang could go to a DC universe where Darkseid is good, and acquire a War Suit. Possibly have Rick upgrade it with extra stuff, and a sweet paint job.
I always loved this story. And personally, I would like to see Twilight eventually go back to her origin dimension to tell off Celestia. C=
I direct your attention to subject A: Girls Bravo a harem comedy, where the main protagonist breaks out in hives as he is allergic to girls. He gets transferred to seiren a world where the population is overwhelmingly female and males are prized for their rarity (cue stampede of girls chasing yukinari)
When he returns home a girl he met follows him home and he doesn't break out in hives (convenient) then it gets all haremy.
So...We're heading back to "DOA"? How many days, weeks, months or years has it been when they were last there? are Kasumi's ninja-clan still hunting for her?
Is Naruto staying or is he going with them? Cause it would be interesting if he sees the comparison between Ninjas from Kasumi's world and his own. Plus Naruto could try & learn to use "Chi" like Kasumi and use it as a substitute to replace his Chakra. Another thing...I think he might join the girls in the Next DOA tournament.
8156031 Same along with Sunset. Both have a score to settle with Celestia.
When do you guys think we'll find out the status of Equestria since Twilight left?
8170696 Yes, but not to this extent!
8156157 dude, I still have the first 6 dvds of that anime, still funny. thanks for reminding me of that.
Okay… I haven't finished what you've got here yet, but I'd suggest searching the groups on this site for ones regarding 'betas' because I'd honestly swear your writing has actually gotten harder to read in the newer chapters at this point, I'm not sure if it's that English is a second language, that you're dyslexic or dyspraxic (reading and writing difficulties respectively) or something else, but the number of grammar issues is making me go cross eyed on this fic.
I'd also suggest a couple of things regarding the way you're working the fic. First, focus on the protagonists and antagonists more than side characters. Unless whatever is going on with the Oh My Goddess cast in that particular universe is going to have a knock on effect on the main group or is a knock on effect of their actions we probably don't need to see it happening. Second, try to show us what's going on rather than telling us or brushing over things, like the encounter with the Ranma 1/2 universe the girls went to a few chapters back. You sort of brushed over about half of the meeting bit if not more which could have given us a better insight to the girls and made us care one way or another for them.
I wish they had watched some of those shows, or gone to those universes. There where several not so weird ones in there that sounded very interesting.
id watch that
A game show that has two teams in a real life Tower Defense game. One team creates an army of robots while the other creates towers to defend their home base.
A Star Wars like movie set in a steampunk world.
A Back To The Future crossover with Terminator. Where said Terminator is sent back in time to protect Doc Brown from another Terminator sent to kill the creator of time travel.
A Dark Knight film where Batman is replaced with Adam West Batman.
Id watch all of these shows