They're tired of mentors never telling them what they need to know. They're tired of always being expected to forgive others, no matter what. They're tired of always being the one who saves the day when the people they save aren't worth it.
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I tried to get into this story a couple times, but the writing is honestly just too bad for me to really enjoy, the dialogue is stilted, and the pace is way too fast, it feels like the author just refuses to use conjunctions, and tends to repeat the same exposition multiple times throughout the same sentences.
Hopefully this story gets some good proofreading, and editing done, as I'm rather intrigued by the plot.
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This is mostly for ideas and one shots of ideas that, I have now.
nice