• Member Since 17th May, 2015
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Burning Sunset


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Two years ago, Sunset met five girls who offered her their hands in friendship. Yet after overhearing Applejack and Rainbow Dash making fun of her and claiming that there was no way Sunset had what it took to be a part of their group, Sunset swore she would pay them back for their betrayal, and did so in the most painful way she could.
Now with the portal opening, the events of the first Equestria Movie is going to take place with some major changes. Can Twilight rally the girls and form a new team to take on Sunset's Hellfire Club and win back the Element of Harmony, or will Team Harmony manage to bring it together and defeat Hell's Queen?

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I'd suggest for this just to double space the paragraphs instead of indenting them. That way, things can look a bit more orderly~:heart:

6095626 :heart: Thankies, I changed it, took the indents out and double spaced instead :yay:

I've been wanting to watch Air Gear for a while, but I've been busy with other shows. Maybe this will get me off my lazy butt to go check it out. Nice start, but may need a bit more expanding. Good start. Keep it up, if you continue.

6095743 Thanks :pinkiehappy: Air Gear is actually pretty awesome and the theme song is even 20% more awesome! :rainbowlaugh: Though I can't understand a word :pinkiecrazy: The music still rocks though! And if I continue this story, I already have plans to expand the chapter some, and expand more on this fusion world, not that fusion you silly saiyans so no silly dancing! Yes, some definite plans are in the works to expand on everything that this plot bunny had caused. :heart:

6096053 good to hear. I wanna start an anime crossover myself. If your interested, check my page in about 30mins. Gonna need help.

Please please PLEASE continue this story. Read Air gear and saw the anime. Was bad ass and awesome!
Love to see what happens next.

i see Sunset does regret what she did to Fluttershy, bet she has nightmares about it.

6096092 I'm going out for a bit right now, but I will stop by and check it out later today :pinkiehappy:


6096134 I'm debating it and I do have tons of ideas for the story and if I do continue, Sunset is sorry for what she did to Fluttershy especially, but also to Pinkie Pie and Rarity. Not so much when it comes to AJ and Dash. :heart:

6098856 no problem. It'll be up when you get back. Also, figured she wouldn't easily forgive AJ and RD.

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