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Keywii_Cookies55


Ameteur writer, light fan of many things, avid Let's Play viewer, Reluctant brony due solely to the rest of the fandom. For what it's worth I ship FluttershyxWaluigi.

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Pinkie is a bubbly party pony that loves to make everyone around her smile, even if that includes the viewer. But how much do we really know about Pinkie? What could she be hiding from the Cakes? From her friends? From everypony? What could be her big secret?

This is a story unlike most I've read here on Fimfiction, I've written it in 1st person pony perspective instead of 3rd. Delve into the mind of Pinkie Pie as she goes about her life fighting monsters and being the element of laughter.

Follow along as I attempt to captivate another side of Pinkie, one I hope you enjoy. As well as display the wide range of emotions I know she has.

I try to follow the show as closely as possible, so if you notice an inconsistency error be sure to let me know right away and I'll see about fixing it.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 4 )

This... might actully be a logical explanation for future episodes. Or, any episode involving an unexplainable Pinkie Pie's actions as a "side dish", so to speak. :rainbowderp: Let's see where this goes. :twilightsmile:

Review

You've read a lot, haven't you. This story avoids what makes others horrid, and might actually be quite good, except for a few things that make me send you to the writing guide located in the popup upon hovering over FAQ on top of this site. However, while personal experiences are extremely important since no one else could understand how autism and similiar truly feel, it seems to be lacking an actual story. Somewhere you are going with it, because doing mundane things from an autistic point of view is... not quite enough. Nothing that would keep people, you know? Without that, the audience would only be interested by the portrayal, not from actual entertainment.

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