Life in equestria is average and mundane one night the mane 6 are looking forward to a super meteor shower. An event that occurs once every 400 years and every pony is exited to watch this once in a lifetime event. But during the display something appens and the land of Equestria will never be the same again.
SPAAAAAAAAAAAACCCCCCCCCCCEEEEEEE!!!!!! Ey! wasa mata with ya?! get outa here! Erhm, pardon my coulege, he sometimes gets out of hand. Now, about this story, it is truly a wonderfull story. i will be following from now untill whenever. i will come back soon, ta.
Hmmm..... Upon closer inspection, it seems that some work could be done on this. still good, but a little steriotypical, if you know what i mean. so, contact me and i'll give you a link to a group called 'Lookinv for Editors'. so, thats my opinion on it. i shall continue reading at another time.
Two years and the cover art’s typo hasn’t been fixed. lol
You spelt friendship as “Frienship”
in desperate need of grammar checking and basic sentence syntax.