Twilight is given her next exam from Princess Celestia. She tries to pass but ultimately fails.How will this effect a pony that has never failed in her life?
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Shall I edit this?
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That would be nice if you have the time. Thanks :)
Stupid question, but didn't Twilight STUDY for the test beforehand? And why did Celestia send her a test on a subject she had NOT read about before?
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Yes, I said she had studied a few times, and Celestia had given her lessons on physics before. The point the story was making was that for once she was out of her comfort zone.
You know, when I first looked at this, I mis-read physics as 'physical'. I think that the latter would work much better in this kind of story, as Twilight is very well-versed in knowledge, but not very fit.
It'd be a lot funnier, too.
6063427 The only problem is that Twilight is 'well-versed' in science and math (or at least according to their schooling system), and those subjects are the basis of physics. Sure physics can be magnitudes harder, but science and math is her kinda' thing.
I think having Twilight fail a physical exam would make more sense because it's really the only subject you cannot beat with only knowledge (aside from music and arts, of course). It'd definitely be out of her comfort-zone.
Plus, it'd be the one exam she'd never expect.
Aside from that, the story was pretty good for a starting story, keep up the work, and try to work a bit more on characterization choices.
Example:
Twilight loves a good challenge, so she would probably ask for better tutoring styled for her rather than ask for this.