More than he bargained for

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shinikage

shinikage #1 · Jun 7th, 2015 · 3 · ·

seems like the author decide to either end it early or end witch a cliffhanger for a sequel, either way it was going nice yet a bit rushed but for a first fic it was pretty decent

Frankie2

Frankie2 #2 · Jun 7th, 2015 · 2 · ·

Okay. This was totally unexpected. I'm not sure how to feel about this.

Lord_Kalbario

Lord_Kalbario #3 · Jun 7th, 2015 · 6 · ·

Decent, but rushed
...like i mean wooosh! And I'm talking about Superman's speed when he's got to go to the toilet and he's caught up in the middle of a battle in the other side of the galaxy and he's been holding it in for like 12 hours fast!

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