• Member Since 17th Jan, 2014
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Clockwork94


Just a guy from Peru who likes pc games and write few words in his free time. Because I'm practicing english, I require your help to improve my skills.

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Her obsession with human technology started with a simple spell from the Starswirl the bearded section in the Canterlot library. After a few mistakes (including the abduction of Anonymous from Earth) she decide to acquire this piece of advenced technology called 'PC' by the humans. But, she needs the help of her friend: Pinkie Pie, to retrieve the artifact. Soon, the purple alicorn will understand that her actions might have consequences... Mortal consequences.

First fanfic. Constructive feedback allowed. Have in mind that I'm from Latin America. Picture might be useful to describe Twily's PC.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 15 )

3816665

Thank you, it was fun to make this fic. But I'm very lazy to make a sequel this week... Besides, I have plans. Big plans and new ideas for new stories.

3816930

Sid Meier's Civilization, Alpha Centauri & Alien Crossfire, Age of Empires (I-III), Rise of Nations & Rise of Legends... I have a 'small' list, but I perfer to begin with Civilization and Alpha Centauri. It's for Twilight to make her understand the human behavior through the ages and in the future.

OMG in the sequel have Anon and Twilight play Minecraft!!!! Plz?????

I'm gonna keep an eye on this. You have a good set up here, and you have delivered some good humor so far. Keep up the good work. :)

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Thanks dude. I'll continue the story eventually.

YES Twilight gets shafted by Pinkie getting an obsolete model Computer, YES that made my day so have a like and good story

You messed up your tenses a lot, slipping between past tense and present tense.

So... she bought the same computer I have?


No. I have a Pentium 4 Dell. Seriously!

i'm using a pentium 4 dell to read this...
LEL

i still use AOL
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