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Blue Devil
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Well I definitely like it.
You change from first to third person a couple times, missing a few commas and a couple other bits. Were I not on a phone I would highlight but will leave that to a far more qualified proof reader
So, Pinkie Pie is a two-for-one deal, whether you want to deal with a sadistic Pinkamena or not. Interesting; did she start off as Pinkamena and just hide it really well, or do they two personalities switch off like a tag team?
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MOAR please
Anytime soon for more please.
She basically raped him in to submission. Started nice, but moving on, sorry.
Well, this story has grabbed my interest. More please