Applebloom has always been extremely dedicated to the Cutie Mark Crusaders and always tried the hardest to get her mark, but what's she to do when a retry at an early Cutie Mark attempt lands the filly in the Everfree Forest? All the while an ancient evil awakens and hides away, plotting his return, before running into a certain earth pony...
As I said before, EXCELLENT first chapter!
Wonderful descriptions, the characters stayed extremely in-character throughout, and the setup seems perfect already!
Can't wait to see how the story progresses!
I aprove
DIS GONNA BE GOOOOOOD
Oh boy, here we go!
this is getting intresting
MUST HAVE MOOOOORREEEEEE