Twilight Sparkle travels to Canterlot seeking justice. When one of her friends is taken captive, Twilight sets out with spell and sword to save her. (Sequel to The Sword Coast, inspired by the Baldur’s Gate series)
A meteor impacts the nation of Equestria, Planet Equis. Tranquility is quickly snuffed out when a poison begins to spread violently. The Princesses cannot combat this unknown threat, as no knowledge of it exists. Help comes from an unexpected source.
I like how you kill Fluttershy then everything is all better and everyone is all happy. Pretty good story, I just wished it was a bit longer! Thumb up!
790839 Well, if it was MEANT to be a trollfic, that's different. I couldn't tell if you were serious or not. Not bad at all for an hour's work, really.
Oh thank you, but I don't want to use the "It's bad cuz its a trollfic" excuse because it only started out as a trollfic, then I actually started to write a coherent story with gore just under the Mature level. I acknowledge it's a mediocre fic, and was just trying to see how the FimFiction community would react to something like this.
so dark, but so good. you should do a story on Fluttershy and how she ends up going totally insane including and scene when she kills Angel.
Interesting, but rushed. I felt some horror and sadness, but it feels too shallow to make any sort of lasting impact.
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I actually was waiting to go to work yesterday and thought to myself "Let's write a trollfic". After I developed a pretty coherent story, however, I dropped the trollfic and wrote the rest of the story within an hour. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Derpy_Hooves.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Derpy_Hooves.png
....Wut
Thumbs up anyway XD
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I like how you kill Fluttershy then everything is all better and everyone is all happy.
Pretty good story, I just wished it was a bit longer!
Thumb up!
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Well, if it was MEANT to be a trollfic, that's different. I couldn't tell if you were serious or not. Not bad at all for an hour's work, really.
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Oh thank you, but I don't want to use the "It's bad cuz its a trollfic" excuse because it only started out as a trollfic, then I actually started to write a coherent story with gore just under the Mature level. I acknowledge it's a mediocre fic, and was just trying to see how the FimFiction community would react to something like this.
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It's always the quiet ones...
But seriously, psycho Fluttershy?
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Knowing...certain background information regarding this fic...I can safely say this is certainly good work for how long you actually did work on it.
It's completely ridiculous, insane, and weird for a premise...but somehow you make it coherent and even funny for how absurd it is.
Is it a bad story in a sense of...making sense? Why, of course. But who said fics need to make sense anymore? NOT ME!
In all seriousness, a fun little fic indeed. More attention, it could use.
i knew one day fluttershy would snap! now its only a matter of time until this exactly happens in the series on the hub