During their latest expedition to The Castle of the Two Sisters the main six come across a book on alternate dimensions. Then an unexpected spell is cast sending the main six to another dimensions where they meet the Teen Titans.
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Its Dimension
I noticed that Rarity said Tappstry its actually Tapestries since she was calling the curtain
Don't be afraid of exposition and detail
Give a flashback for Twilight getting the letter from her former mentor/fellow princess (if it is following season 5 canon)
Oh also with the detail
If there is Curious Twilight...make her actually wonder about it. A thought may c me spontaneous but the research doesn't.
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Thank you I really appreciate your help. I want to make this the best it can be. As for the exposition I never really written any before you have any advice?
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Exposition is kind of writing the lore
Say there was a big bad that's gonna destroy all of equestria. You are gonna have to make his prophecy and background and all that junk.
Err you get what I'm saying?
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I get thank you.
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No problem.
Oh! A lot of people will give you flak,just don't give up and if you need prereaders/proofreaders there is a group..just look around
I am intruiged...
Continue...
Lovely. I'm intriuged as to where you will be heading with this!
must know fluttershys power...
Oooooh! Cliffhanger!
*DUN DUN DUUUUUN!*
New chapter hype!
I'll be waiting
-CactusMan
Usually I don't like when people make this kind of stuff, but this I'm intrigued with mostly because I'm watching the original Teen Titans right now.
This is a good start, but there are a few typos and a lot of the characters seem to know exactly what's happening and is sometimes unclear who is speaking. I'd also stick more to Rarity's real personality, you got it right, but randomly kissing Robin for no reason... I don't know
To summarize, there are quite a few problems, but if you revised it, it could be pretty cool.
Edit: Sometimes I do like these crossovers, they just need to be well thought out and not intended to be taken seriously.
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I'm glad you're enjoying it.
About the Rarity and Robin kissing scene it's suppose to be spur of the moment so no one knows who kissed who though everyone believes it was Rarity who kissed Robin.