Really nice, you had a very interesting idea about Babs Seed's cutie mark.

That was freakin' awesome. Thumbs up friend.

The other filly let out a gasp and she immediately retracted her hand.

Hoof, not hand.

Aww, I was hoping for AppleSeed shipping.

Great story. It had an interesting plot to it.

Setting aside the grammar mistakes, I'll give 'er a favorite and a thumbs up.

I should read this.

I have recorded a reading of this and was wondering if you would not mind me showing it on the youtubes i will give all the credit for the writing the the description. Its my first one and i'm sleep deprived and made is as a good laugh. Also funny in a fucked up, were all going to hell sorta way.

5960758 Sure. Link me to it when you post it.

Frankly, I'm surprised it took so long for someone to write this fic.

Have my upvote.

My one problem with this story:

She couldn't very well tell anyone where it had come from

But then she told Apple Bloom.

Actually, I have another problem: it would be nice to know a bit more about the other filly. We don't know her name, what she looks like, etc.

But all the same, retain my upvote.

she shouldn't hit her, as it would only make her point not stand in front of miss Cheerilee but she couldn't help it.

Care to explain this? I'm confused.