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What could possibly go wrong?

Comments ( 9 )

next story, THREEWAY!

It was alright, could have used a slight touch more description and editing. Overall I give it about a 6.5/10.

PiMan #3 · Aug 23rd, 2016 · · 2 ·

Was this fed through Google Translate? The grammar and word choices are bizarre at times.

First of all love the ship. Second it was an okay story, third keep going.

“Who’d enter the private quarters?”


Short and sweet. Neat.

Most excellent.

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