"The want it need it spell always does the trick!"
What was Twilight's first exposure to the spell that made her so sure?
Inspired by the story by E. A. Poe.
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Also Known as why Shining Armor's Facial Animation Sucks! :D
Inspired by an argument.
Okay, here are a few explanations just in case - If the want it need it spell can work on a doll, who's to say it cannot also alter a though process? In this case, Twilight cast it on a pony, therefore creating a constant loop of compulsion. The only reason he didn't manage to kill himself is because such a method would be very hard, especially when ramming head first into something. you're bond to knock yourself out. Twilight made him want and need his own destruction, but was fixated on the rack, hence why that was his method.
As for why he wasn't out longer, IRL the movies have it wrong, if you don't wake up in a short while after passing out from a head injury, you never will. Obviously I have no idea how this would work with horses, but these horses talk, sooo... yeah.
And if it wasn't obvious Twilight started to hallucinate.
Hm...a ponyfied version of one of Poe's most popular short stories?
This should be interesting...
So you wrote all of this in about a day? My God, you're bloody talented. I'd love to be able to write as quickly as you with such a high-quality style.
I'm glad I'm not the only one who hates Shining's face. Those eyes... that box-like face.... eughhhhh
598069 Oh so true. That was the biggest down point in the canterlot episodes. ^-^ And I'm glad you like it. I've been writing for years though, and when I'm inspired I can really pump 'em out.
Did you by any chance do this to make a point? I noticed that copy-paste story here a while ago and there was a big arguement about it. Was this written because of that?
Gave you a thumb up, just because you mention Allen Poe.
598107 Nah, not to make a point, I just got inspired to actually do a version of my own from the ensuing argument. I don't usually write fanfiction, so it was just because a plot bunny attacked me.
Just for mentioning the great Edgar Allen Poe, you receive an instant like from me.
Tell-Tale Heart? OH HELL YES!
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Wild plot bunny used nose-wiggle! It's super effective!
I like the story, though parts of it are occasionally a little confusing. It could use an editing pass, that's the main thing, but I like the effect you build out of things.
Crazy-Twi is crazy.....
"Now in death, bring me life! All that I am will be coming home now. I did it all for you.
I'm becoming real now with all I am. All I am."
598251 Thank you. I'll most likely do an editing run in a few days, once My brain turns off auto edit.
598242 That gif is epic.
598261 Oh my, what is that from?
598362 Coming Home Elena Siegman and Kevin Sherwood
598362 Why did you delete my comment?
I do like Poe and this is fairly sadistic. I enjoyed it.
.....
I got banned for this.
But Poe's work is in public domain now, so if you acknowledge the author, it should be fine.
598069
And you, I remember you, you said I plagiarised The Tell-Tale Heart, but as I said above, that tale is in public domain now. And I acknowledged Poe as the author.
599191 I didn't think I did that. o.0 I can delete comments?
599693 -_- yes. yes you can.
599721 Well I'm sorry. I'm knew here and I fI did so, I totally didn't mean too.
While this is a very good story, I do see some capitalization issues and a misspelled word or two.
596943 yes yes it does
Man, this is a creepfest so far!
Jeebus....this freaked me out!
VERY good writing here!
618890 Thank you. ^-^
This story is the reason why I like reading older fanfics!