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Dear Princess

It has been one thousand years since a unicorn by the name of Erebus has stepped hoof on Equestria, he is a mysterious pony who once served under Princess Luna as her assistant. now that he has returned he has taken up refuge in Canterlot Castle and decides to once again serve Luna but as he will soon discover history has a way of repeating itself.

Chapters (4)

Chapter 1 · 13th May 2012 · 1,544 words
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Chapter 2 · 27th May 2012 · 1,638 words
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Chapter 3 · 20th Jun 2012 · 2,085 words
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Chapter 4 · 4th Feb 2013 · 1,336 words
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MeTaLGuArD #1 · May 14th, 2012 · · · Chapter 1 ·

Your lack of punctuation is disturbing. The action felt a good bit rushed too, mostly because of the former. It's the only bigger complaint I have so far though.