It is the eve of the first annual Summer Sun Celebration's Masquerade of the night and everyone is going to be there. for most thought is is a chance to get together with love ones and friends, and for these four ponies it is most certain to be a night of taking a chance for love. the OCs used were; Equestria Drifter's OC Midnight Creamer, Foreverflame400's OC Switch Styles, My younger brother's (who has a fondness for Scootaloo) OC Shadow Riff, and my OC Scribble.
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Well, at least it's OC's and BACKGROUND PONIES...
That's... different...
Thank you
A little awkward to read. I felt like I was being jolted along. It was a good story, but it felt a little compressed.
yeah this story made me realize I'm bad at writing multi-point perspective stories.
I passed by and reviewed this, even though you haven't been online for years now. Points for avoiding the utterly clichéd OC/Mane Six pairs, though there's still the usual problem that 95% of your readers don't know anything about the OCs or the people behind them. It's a shame you didn't write more, since the fic's problems mostly feel like those of simple inexperience.