Not much to say about me just a guy who love mlp
I've made a lot of poor choices, and now I'm living with the consequences. Breakups, debt, getting disowned, and defiled. My penis gets me into the worst situations. I can't blame anyone but myself though. My action and my consequences. I'll just have to keep on flowing. I hope Ponyville is ready for me
Lots of bad language. The occasional objectification of mares. Mentions of drug use.
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Ya'll need to check out this story by my boy Soul. You might not like the MC at first, but in time you'll see that he'll change himself, arise from the ashes and start new and fresh like a pheonix. Plus, Flow knows how to bust a rhyme, and I think that's just extra points to the already intriguing story. Make sure to read all of it, because I know damn well ya'll would read a 10k+ clop fic haha.
It really caught my attention. I look forward to see up dates and what happens next.
i have to ask, will the Griffins still be after him and when this story takes place?
Twilight a Alicorn yet does she have her castle.
5852437 Chronologically? I'd say a few months after the defeat of Tirek. So we have Alicorn Twilight with the castle. That's when things start to branch off into their own continuity. As for the other questions read and find out my friend.
Besides the fact that it had cuss words (that I personally don't like) it seemed ok.
That was supposed to be a racist/stereotype sentence… right? That's how I took it…
5857429 Absolutely a racist stereotype sentence. Well glad you thought it was a cool. Drop a like. Oh I've posted quite a few comments on your story Pegasus Feathers.
Oh and could you please tell me if there was anything really bad that needs work or anything really good you liked?
5857462 Just get rid of a lot of the cuss words is my only thing… (like I mentioned before, I'm not one for cussing) but that's completely your choice.
Did you change the story name when rewriting it?
Not a bad story at all. You've set up the characters well and made them interesting. Some typos here and there, but nothing a good proofreader couldn't help with.
5862023 Yeah I did. I didn't really think it was appropriate anymore considering the massive overhaul.
You asked for feedback on this, but I honestly don't know what to say other than it's just good.
You seem to have a nice grasp on how to write a first-person story (definitely better than what I've done), and yeah...sorry I have nothing more to say. Good job. 
5867511 Well thank you. If my feedback is that my writing was good enough not to have feedback I must be doing something right. Thanks for commenting. I have one question though. What did you think of the characters? That's my biggest worry that my characters are unappealing and not in the good way.
5867617 I liked the main character well enough, as well as the other characters.
They seem rough around the edges but I kind of like that...I mean, nobody's bad enough to come across as unlikable. 
I understand your concern because I've written a limited third-person perspective story (not first person, but still similar) in which the main character was really angry about everything the whole time, so I was afraid people wouldn't like her. 
The impression I got from your characters was realistic. Definitely not something I'd see in a cardboard fanfic by a nine-year-old where every snippit of inner and outer dialogue makes ya think "Said no person ever".
I don't know. I can't give a real formal critique for the life of me, but the point is, I wouldn't worry about unappealing characters.
5867677 Well thank you. You've definitely given me some of the most helpful feedback so far. I appreciate it, and your time. By the way, I just read your Applejack fic. Hilarious.
5867715 Haha thanks!
No regrets on writing that one. 
You seem really into this story, mah nig. Honestly if you want constructive advice, don't look for me. But still, good job I guess, though this sort of story isn't for me to be honest.
5864548 What was it originally called?
5873892 Rhythm and Harmony. So what did you think of the chapter?
5873161 Thanks for the honesty
5887235 Thanks for the feedback man I appreciate the honesty. One question though. You say the story keeps faithful to itself what exactly does that mean?
5886952 Not sure, since I don't really remember the old story anymore, sorry.
Edit: Was it about a Zebra who tried to pay off debts with rapping, but really wasn't that good at it, and had a unicorn friend with a hoodie?
5909446 Bingo!
5918581 Ah. For some reason the cover image you used made me think it's about a human at first, even though you didn't even use the human tag.