When the aspects joined forces to obliterate their once brother, a small fragment of uncorrupted essence remained. Merely a fraction of a percent of what was once strong enough to destroy worlds, it is banished to give both Azeroth and their brother a second chance at life. In Equestria, in the body of a whelp, the ex-aspect Neltharion is truly awake for the first time in thousands of years, realizing just how far you can fall before hitting bottom, and how hard the climb back up will be.
Chapters (6)
This is going to be interesting, I can feel it.
"I have faced the ravages of time, the curse of nightmares, and the mists of sorcery, thanks to the others! What weapons do you bring?"
A soft, White, bunny apparently.
By my ever so fuzzy beard this looks to be brilliant! Fav
Aye, it brings me back to the good old days of Azeroth. Props for your deep knowledge of the Aspects and of Azerothian lore.
"molten blood oozed form scars that would never quite heal"
should be "from scars"
"How clearly he could see it now, without the caress of the old gods clouding his judgment, had it really not been obvious to him he was under their spell?"
Grammatically odd sentence - consider re-wording
I could also spot some grammatical errors (I think).
Very good overall though.
This story is great, not only because its been well written so far (one chapter is hard to base on, but so far so good), but also because it doesn't punish me for my lack of knowledge of the Warcraft universe. Also nice to see stories of the other races. Wonder how Spike will react.
Really amazing story so far, please sir can I have some more
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-Open Ticket-
" Hey Blizz, my issue is that Deathwing appears to be bugged in DS, we downed all the bosses leading up to spine, but when we start up spine, we just get an error saying we need to buy the equestria expansion to do the next part. what gives?"
"they'll likely make raiding me a weekly occurrence" Budum Tish.
Anyways great chapter.
one word:
AWESOME.
I hope updates are frequently and go on for a looooong time!
582059 HAHAHA! Equestria expansion! EPIC to say the least
Achievement unlocked : To the Moon! (Defeat Nightmare Moon without using the Elements of Harmony power boost.)
Wouldn't it be cool if we could get the author to use our mains as the raiders.
I find it extremely difficult to imagine Nelthy without his armor or without the molten cracks between said armor.
Also I can't stop reading Flint and Tinder's quotes in Ork voices.
"The drag' 'ooh used it before snored 'lot, an 'e was so big it made a 'uge smoke cloud. Then some ponies came and beat 'em up, and sent 'im away cryin' cos' ah it."
At least he got out before a DK soloed him. Once you reach that point your badass cred is pretty much toast.
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*sorry about the caps*
"I AM DEATHWING! THE DESTROYER! THE END OF ALL THINGS! INEVITABLE! INDOMINABLE! I AM THE CATACLYSM!"
...and you had a teeny, tiny panic attack at a party. It's okay Nel, things (might) get better from here.
This is quite possibly the best WoW crossover I have seen. Kudos, many kudos to you.
please dont make the romantic part too fast built it slowly
"You will treat me with the reverence I deserve."
You could still be a bit less abrasive Nel, but at least things are starting to look better for you.
this story be good
"Have you not been through enough?"
Take a page from the book of Fluttershy. Soon you to will join the herd, I'm sure. At any rate laughs will be had, Nel.
Well, I have to say, this story is the closest I have come to wanting to play WoW again (Shaman main from vanilla to WotLK, Blizzard was just too abusive to my class to justify the monthly payment).
Great character in 'Nel' (ha ha haaa, shrinkage) and the elementals are rather funny. I like the repentant and gruff nature you have for him, and it really is a logical development. All in all, great work.
Oh i like this, i never play world of Warcraft i tried it once but never got in to it, but im still a fan of the warcraft rts series.
those games are awesome and what i like most about those games are the lore, it doesn't matter what game it is, starcraft diablo or Warcraft Blizzard always make the best story line and lore, you really gotta give them credit for that, and as such i'm looking forward to this story.
I like how you made Deathwing/Neltharion´s personalty in this, i don't know how accurate it sens i have nothing to compare against but regardless i like it.
I found a few thing a bit confusing which were probably mean to be wow references, like the dragon soul, or Deepholm, but that nor relay a problem when you have a warcraft wiki on a separate page
Lastley the elemental´s.. i don't really know anything abouthe them except there humanoid in appearance, and im a bit unsure as to why they who'd serve him, is it because he's the first to ever summon them or are they just bored and have nothing better to do?
i was wondering where the romance tag was gone come in to play, so fluttershy with deathwing,not exactly the most ideal couple so that was a bit unexpected which makes it only more intresting and so far u made it work
I agree whit 590698 dont make this thing happen to fast, he just falling in love would be very out of character and the same with fluttershy to a dragon.
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Sweetie Belle isn't sure about this... but curiosity compels her to read on...
Image Macros aside, this story definitely has me interested, despite my initial unwillingness to read it. You've definitely managed to convince me that this Deathwing is the same one that the dragon aspects defeated in the Maelstrom. It was quite interesting to see the perspective of some of the Dragon Soul encounters as viewed through the eyes of the Big Bad himself. Definitely going to be keeping an eye on this story.
Only one bit of complaint I have is that you misspelled Alexstrasza in chapter 2. Apart from a few minor spelling errors, your writing is nearly flawless.
can't wait for next chapter
"seemed 'understand'"
seemed to understand
"What had happened to his was truly horrifying, after the madness had taken him, only one had survived being killed by his own doing."
should be:
What had happened to his was truly horrifying. After the madness had taken him, only one had survived being killed by his own doing.
"It was a breathtaking sight, the entire clearing was filled with flowers in full bloom under a brilliant night sky."
should be
It was a breathtaking sight. The entire clearing was filled with flowers in full bloom under a brilliant night sky.
I noticed you do this a lot, so those two are just examples. It's better to shorten sentences than make complex compound ones, usually.
Poor poor dragon, being maniplated on social norms that he doesn't understand.
MOAR! Pls moar. i love the way you post every or at least every other day. Keep up the good work. I play WoW so i find those references to the game extremely cool. mentioning Malygos and all. Love it
Poor understanding of social norms and being manipulated in to getting flowers and hes not even sure why, romance always seams to make the best comedy
Awww... It's quite refreshing to see a different take on Deathwing. Keep up the good work!
Great story, I love the little touches of WoW. I'd like to see more Spike/Deathwing interaction.
"You have done NOTHING."
Good attitude, Nel. Keep it up.
For a moment I thought the gift was gonna be the dragon soul somehow and he would flip out
too long since last uppdate. need more
that brought a tear to my eye
Noooooo, wanted to be first
Loved the chapter tho, keep it up
I just have to know, when do you think you'll post the next chapter? I looooooove this sooo much!
"I have been busy in my absence"
Yes, yes you have. You may yet be redeemed.
Being a huge fan of both WoW and MLP:FiM,_ I don't feel alienated from either... I was giggling and d'awwwwing all the way through.
dooooont ship them!!!! DONT
I AM DEATHWING! THE DESTROYER! THE END OF ALL THINGS! INEVITABLE! INDOMINABLE! I AM THE CATACLYSM!
Excellent story so far, I am really enjoying this.
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In answer to your last question, it would be both. They weren't doing anything and by all accounts, shamanism doesn't exist in pony society so no one would be around to summon elementals anyways. (maybe zebra, but thats more likely witch doctorism)
Interesting story. I'll be sure to keep my eye on this. Tracked.
Is this going to continue?
2 things.
1 when will the next chapter come?
2 do not ship neltherion and fluttershy, do NOT
'the Paladin'? does that mean leeroy, or someone else?
that's like the equivelent of 12 lovers! Subconicious love ftw!
Whether you ship them or not I couldn't care, I'm mostly interested in "Nelly" finding redemption. I'm looking forward to the Mane 6's reactions as they find out more about him.