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Tirek and Sombra

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StarlightFeather #1 · Apr 10th, 2015 · · · Chapter 1. Sombras Self ·

Hey, Al. This thing's a lot better than I thought it would be. The only thing is the the tense in the first couple of paragraphs is a bit confused. This is supposed to be present or past tense? Other than that, you don't give yourself enough credit on these things.