Hey, Al. This thing's a lot better than I thought it would be. The only thing is the the tense in the first couple of paragraphs is a bit confused. This is supposed to be present or past tense? Other than that, you don't give yourself enough credit on these things.
Hey, Al. This thing's a lot better than I thought it would be. The only thing is the the tense in the first couple of paragraphs is a bit confused. This is supposed to be present or past tense? Other than that, you don't give yourself enough credit on these things.