Rainbow Dash and Applejack have lived a lot of adventures.
Somehow the blue mare falls in love for the orange mare, but she doesn't know how to admit her feeling towards her. Also she gets a nice surprise.
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Crystal Night
Reading, writing, drawing and playing. That's my life. A normal teenager life. Also I'm Portuguese /)
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I absolutely adore appledash where rainbow is all shy and cute about the relationship, but fics depicting being a lesbian as a bad thing have always been sour to me, because it's a world all about love, tolerance and friendship. A few grammatical errors here and there but overall a nice fic.
5692368 Thank you, I know about the spelling errors since I'm actually portuguese, anyways thanks for your comment.
Short and sweet, only thing I could say for a sequel in this genre would be maybe to made the tale a bit longer, like more events before the actual confessing or just some more events after. It's good but I think it just needed a little more cocontent. For a quick ship tho I say this is good :-)
5938885 I may do the sequel, after I finish one my stories, since I'm reading more ships.
Thanks for the suggestion
5939754 No problem, I'm trying to work on making a story of my own soon but stuck on reading mainly lol
Rainbow Dash sure gets a round in your story's. The little trollop! Nice story anyway.(squee)
6208026 What can I say? Thanks ^^
It has a few spelling mistakes here and there, but it was a nice reading. I'll give you a thumb up
6514032 Thank you