• Member Since 3rd Feb, 2015
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MelancholyIguana


I started watching this show back in November-ish 2011 and it has been a great support for me so I thought I would give back. Now I hope that I can complete this sentence before I run out of chara-

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You wake on golden shores, in a land seemingly familiar.
When a local resident finds you. A zebra fashioned in gold. When her gaze notions worry, you swiftly realize something is wrong.
All the while you hear waves...waves...waves...

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Very nice imagery in those first few sentences. I can just picture floating near the shore of some exotic equestrian beach somewhere.

Grey faded to black.

For some odd reason this reminds me of Dayz mod.

“We have not met before today,
So how did my name come your way?”

It's funny to see this story get the meter correct with Zecora's lines when the show gets it wrong so often :rainbowlaugh:

Overall, very nice read. You certainly have talent.

Oh my god I love you for commenting so fast!
Tbh I thought I would be just another forgotten fan amidst the ocean of existing stories (pun intended)

Also, have a look at my blog in the next couple of days. There is a story I wanted to post but was too short to publish. So I'm gonna cheat and use other means :yay:

Oh glob what a terrible ending...

I mean it was a good ending but terribly sad. To make it to Equestria, only to die from the injuries sustained while on the journey. I guess maybe, at the least, he got to die somewhat happy.

Nice story :ajsmug:

P.S. I liked your depiction of death.

5673638 I wanted to write something a bit different.
Sorry about the feels man. :pinkiesad2: Hug?

First off. Well done on realizing it was death. I thought it was too subtle but nevermind. Also, the other thing is that I wanted to keep gender out of this story to make it more personal to either genders who read it. Clever huh? :twilightsheepish:

Thanks for the comment mate.

The one thing that concerns me is that the person who disliked the video didn't give a reason why...

It's important to be given constructive feedback otherwise the like bar is irrelevant.
Basically I'm not mad... just disappointed :fluttershysad:

5681350 Yeah, its disappointing.:pinkiesad2:

5861946 hmm. Do you mean that the person is disappointing or my story? Either is fine but if its my story I wouldn't mind knowing why :applejackunsure:

5861952 I have no prob with you're story, just that people aren't that... well... Y'know.
My story got 10 dislikes, and I don't know why.

Hello! I just wanted to tell you that the Anon in Equestria group is for characters named Anonymous, not unnamed humans. The title is also the rules
1: Anon
2: In Equestria

5862196 oh OK, yh I agree. May I ask which story? I'll have a read and see if I can help :twilightsmile:
Although I do warn you, it may take me a day or two to get around to it. I'm getting backlogged ha ha

5862375 oh sorry. Because the character remains anonymous I assumed that was fine :twilightoops:

Would you like me to remove it?
If so, how do I do that?

5863818 Oh, my second story! I didn't get very far on the first... it was stupid... but the story with 10 dislikes has more than enough like! You don't have to, and we can't satisfy everyone.

5864352 that's a fair point. I just thought I could help. It is surprising sometimes. I found with one story I wrote called "Pinkie's greatest for" I thought people hated it due to the countless comments about the stories formatting, appearances of poor grammar and small things. It wasn't until I stood back and looked at the like/dislike bar and realised that about a dozen people liked it and there were no dislikes. That made me smile from the heart (to put it in a soppy way) :twilightsmile:

5865160 Wise words!(And I like sappy... sometimes...)

5865200 you're a big softy are yah? :pinkiehappy:
Good, its better to be that way.

Now i want to listen to Mr. Probz Waves song.

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