• Published 2nd Apr 2015
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Friendship carried on through the ages - keam



15 years ago, Twilight said goodbye to her friends and stepped through the mirror the last time. Now, it's finally time for a Twilight to once more attend Canterlot High . But she is not THE Twilight - She is her daughter.

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Interlude: Adagio's discovery

Adagio Dazzle looked over the dwarf conifer in front of her, lifting up the hedge scissor with both hands and determinately starting to cut of one branch after another, working to remove all the dead or sick parts of the bush in a halfhearted attempt to save what was left of the parasite infected dwarf tree. She was soon interrupted, however, as several bits of curly, orange hair clouded her vision so much she could hardly see the plant in front of her.

Putting down the scissor, she impatiently brought her glove covered hand to her forward, grabbing the troubling bits of hair and lifting them up, out of her eyes. But as she was about to put them behind her ear, she froze. In her hand, she could see them dancing around on gusts of air blowing past them instead hanging lifelessly in between her thumb and the palm of her hand like they’d been doing minutes ago.

Standing up, the conifer momentarily forgotten, Adagio knew that something was very, very wrong, and because something was so very wrong, she knew she had no choice but to try and do something she hadn’t done in almost twenty years. Because if it worked, and she could sense the magic in her surrounding, then it’d be a miracle in the face of it.


Slowly closing her eyes and letting her body relax, she focused her hole being on trying to sense if there was any magic in her surroundings and trying to detect and identify magic auras in the environment.

To her own great surprise and astonishment, she did not only sense magic in the air around her, but she could also sense a weak pulse of magic inside herself, and an even greater pulse from somewhere in her house. She also imagined sensing an undefined number of pulses further away, but because of her own weak ability, there was no way for her to say anything with safety.

Opening her eyes again, Adagio immediately knew something very extreme, practically impossible, had happened right there and then, in her own little garden. She had regained a smaller part of her magic, more than she’d ever hoped to have, despite not having any use for it anymore.

However, something bothered her: There had been a second, much more powerful magic pulse, she knew for sure, and it had been not far away, in her own house, too. Adagio knew there was only one person who could have been the owner and source of the magic pulse…

“Crescendo! Could you come out here please?”

Comments ( 7 )

Adagio and Crescendo. LOL! Couldn't have done it better myself... i think. Loved that! :moustache:

6024955
Yeah. That's their names.

6005578 (Sorry, I didn't get a notification about your comment!:facehoof:)
But I have some time again, here is the rest of chapter one errors:

She was awre of her cousin’s worries, 

aware of

managing to walk a few steps before stopping,

managed

She knew that it was possible that any of her 

Try: all or some instead of any

“Principal Luna” 

Luna,"

“Intresting. truly interesting.”

Truly

there you are, 'Clipse!

There

blue skin tone and a dark pink and blue hair

Drop the a

 what’s the news? 

What are the news?

I remember it annoying the teachers a great deal last term "

I remember it annoyed the teachers a lot last term,"

hearing Twilight’s name.

upon hearing

I'll do the next chapters whenever I can.:twilightsmile:

6029510 okay thanks

That was good. Wish it was longer but I take what I can get..

6164213 don't worry, there will be more of 'em, short things like these first, then full-blown chapters.

6631536 you're reviewing my story? Nice! Where can I see it

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