Close Encounters

by HolidayTheWriter

Chapter 7: Heroes' return

Jebediah Succesfully pushes back Minmus and puts it in a stable orbit so it does no harm.

Jeb creates another Moon for Equestria!

News spread about this and Celestia thanks the Kerbals for saving their lives! The Kerbals Return through the Blackhole and it closes shortly after.

Jebediah is remembered as a hero in Equestria and also a hero when he returns home.

The End.

Author's Note:

Sorry about the short Chapter, I ran out of ideas. Sorry.

Comments

[Firestreak2018]

I'm gonna guess that the first like belongs to the author...

Not bad, but not that interesting either. This feels more like a summary of what could've been a really awesome fic...

[SkaterStreak]

The reason your probably have barely any views is because you chapters are too short Maybe make this a story with one long chapter. Also you probably had a shitty cliff hangers after a 100 word chapter! Scratch this story and start over with longer chapters,get inspired!

[HolidayTheWriter]

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I accidentally liked because I was trying to figure out how to actually save a chapter. (I'm stupid) Thanks for the tips, I will use them all in the future.
5602120 Yep, The chapters ARE short. I meant this purposely to give the reader ease when reading this, I guess this isn't a good idea, BUT the Cliffhangers I thought were a good idea, thanks for your criticism and I'll use these tips in the future.

[Firestreak2018]

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I look forward to any future works that you make! Hopefully there'll be more meat in your stories then.

[tanglefire2112]

Certainly has the potential to be a great story.
Right now it's just a skeleton. Each sentence seems like a short summary of an event that could be given its own fully descriptive paragraph. If you expanded each of your current sentences into a full paragraph with 3 or more sentences you'd have a real "out of this world" fic!