I'm a Brony Writer who likes to write about KSP and MLP, Maybe I'll write simply on KSP alone.
Close encounters is a Story where Kerbals try to find new life. They find a black hole near Minimus and go into it. They find things VERY unexpected and bad things happen. This story is my first pony related story ever and is also the very first that includes speech. This story is a crossover of MLP and KSP.
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I'm gonna guess that the first like belongs to the author...
Not bad, but not that interesting either. This feels more like a summary of what could've been a really awesome fic...
The reason your probably have barely any views is because you chapters are too short
Maybe make this a story with one long chapter. Also you probably had a shitty cliff hangers after a 100 word chapter! Scratch this story and start over with longer chapters,get inspired!
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I accidentally liked because I was trying to figure out how to actually save a chapter. (I'm stupid) Thanks for the tips, I will use them all in the future.
5602120 Yep, The chapters ARE short. I meant this purposely to give the reader ease when reading this, I guess this isn't a good idea, BUT the Cliffhangers I thought were a good idea, thanks for your criticism and I'll use these tips in the future.
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I look forward to any future works that you make! Hopefully there'll be more meat in your stories then.
Certainly has the potential to be a great story.
" fic!
Right now it's just a skeleton. Each sentence seems like a short summary of an event that could be given its own fully descriptive paragraph. If you expanded each of your current sentences into a full paragraph with 3 or more sentences you'd have a real "out of this world