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First to comment/like. Good story, good job. It might not be good because I have low expectations but to me it was good!
Hmm, interesting.
Uuuuuum
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In all seriousness though this is a good start. The atmosphere was built good with Rumble exploring and the backstory of the mansion, and you left on a good dramatic note. You do description very well also, but there are areas where I feel there could be a little more.
Does this mean he floated up to his hooves black mage style, or that he did some super equine acrobatics like a Devil May Cry character?
Also,
Yeah, you really need a proof reader dude. Don't know where you'll ever find one though. *Hint, hint, nudge, nudge*
5575630 Honestly, I wasn't thinking of Homestuck when I wrote this. And thanks for pointing out the errors.
I see you've added a little to the chapter since my editing.
Still liking it so far, I wonder how exactly Discord is going to respond to this demon?