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Severith


Hello! I'm Severith. I've been writing stuff since I was around 13 in eighth grade. I wrote a lot of short stories about random stuff. Profile art done by CadetRedShirt.

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This is my submission for Equestria Daily's The More Most Dangerous Game Writing Contest. The prompt was: A human finds a young pony abandoned in a cardboard box, and decides to raise her as his own.

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I agree, the story is rushed towards the end. And while I liked the premise, I've never been able to get emotionally involved in the mld stories. And sadly, this is no exception. Though the writing is pretty good. Best of luck to you on the competition.

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