I have gone through my life here in Ponyville for quite some time without a special somepony. The thought of a mare by my side to chat and hang out with has crossed my mind, but it has been difficult for me to talk to other ponies, let alone a cute mare. Shyness has plagued my love life it seems. That is until a certain lovely, yellow pegasus named Fluttershy crossed my path one day. Too bad she is just as shy as me. Luckily, she has five friends to force the two of us into dates. Still, two shy ponies interacting is a recipe to make almost any other pony facehoof from the combined shyness.
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That´s probably the only chase where I already like the idea of them being forced into dating, since well they probably won't do it otherwise. I start to read it later, still have to learn today.
In a way he seems more social akward than Fluttershy, but then again it seems to be that certain episode and then she only would have her friends a some sort of advantage against him. I guess the only thing I thought was a pity, was that it looked a bit like he seemed to be creepy for Fluttershy, since she was backing away.
Then again I could probably think of it the other way around, that she is even more shy and was backing away because of that.
While I don't like it if it is at first sight, this story is a good idea.
In the end I somehow got the feeling her friends made Fluttershy feel the worst, as if she would had the feeling that they ruined the date in the end.
Well it is nice, it is going better than I thought with them being shy and staying like this. I kind of hope there aren't only 8 chapters or at least a sequel. I just don't like it to end to soon. I would like something like them meeting their parents and all kind of reactions. I bet they can break Raritys patient.
7191662 Hey, thanks for the comments, Texus! I hope you're enjoying my story. I can't really say anything about Fluttershy's feelings without spoiling anything. Unfortunately, this is going to be a relatively short story with 7 chapters. Though I could write a sequel if this I like how this story turns out. Thanks for reading!
The shyness is powerfull with this one omg i admit its so cute and amazing, this story is so sweet i can just scream in delight and it gives me diabeetus btw amazing story and also gud luck to your oher fics such diabetes XD
I don't remember who was more shy, or well like they are supposed to be, but I hope it isn't going to be always him, who has less strenght and whatever the others are going to do for them.
I just hope there is a thing where he is sort of better than Fluttershy. Sometimes I just get the feeling more guys than Females in this storys are pathetic.
I know I'm usually rather fast to talk about that, but I want to say it before it actually happens. Since they both are supposed to be shy, I hope that he has his strong side too. Sorry I'm just remembering all the bad storys.
While talking about it I completely forgot to say that I liked this chapter, I just got a bit cautious about one certain moment, since I just remembered that he was a it weirder in the last chapter too.
In a way it was pretty nice this time, I just was a bit sympathetically towards his feelings in the end, and he haven't done anything that made him look like a total idiot this time, or at least he wasn't made look like it. I still waiting for something that he can do better than her, so that everyone has a special skill I don't exactly mean his Cutiemark only.
Not sure if Fluttershy was really interessted in him, that she would more or less ignore him that much, but I would understand if she was a bit distracted a bit from the show, but then again she was just talking with fans and I don't exactly see the reason to have a (fangirl moment) fangasm right now.
However I got at least a "date", where Fluttershy didn't only looked like the Alpha, or in which he was made look like a wimp, much more even than Fluttershy even if she is one of my favourites.
I think I said everything......
I would like to have a new chapter please.
I would like it if it turns out that what they do turns out pretty badly in the end. I mean that they give him to much pressure and stuff like that.
tell that Cadance in most storys. No matter what others say, it is most likely the chase that Cadance is maybe unintentionally made to force the characters together instead of offering wanted, and not unwanted advice.
Their perfect date would probably be, just letting them stay in the same room often enough till one of them would try to say something.
I think the story is getting better lately in my eyes. I didn't liked it when it looked like he was the only one acting "really" shy, or clumsy and Fluttershy was doing everything right. However I maybe still hope on her doing more wrong on a date than him, it looks a bit akward to me that he is the one with always doing the most mistakes, even if I think it is done better lately.
Nice chapter and thank you it came just right today.