Sunset always hated to be second, and when Celestia decided to expell her, she had more hate in her heart. One day after years of being in the human world, Sunset is back to Equestria to bring chaos and bad luck to Twilight Sparkle. After some time, Sunset realizes that she needed a friend and that her world is lighted up with just a little smile.
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5518913
So you're saying that ALL Pokemon crossovers are terrible?
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Well, I guess I better give up on my dreams of writing, since Pokemon and MLP inspired me to write.
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I'm gonna do both. I have a collection of OCs and Fan characters.
I'll give you a review later because it seems the other users in your comments (5518913 5519216 ) are useless and lack an open mind—one more than the other. Otherwise, I'll see if I can give you a review later today.
From hell, to you, and back again,
Soto Konoha, Fort Impression On Everypony
I have never read a single good crossover and this... Just wasn't it.
Sorry to be harsh but it's just that crossovers aren't very good in general, more original pieces are better and do better on fimfiction.net but all of us have those bad fanfics, my first one was a doozy but then I switched to what I'm good at and I have been doing better, you just have to play around with ideas and it'll get better.
5519227 you know what? Just go for it. 3 out of my 5 stories are crossovers, and the first two are actually well-liked by those that have read them.
The key to crossovers is to not just rip off the base material. You have to make your own story from the crossing.
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...What the fuck just happened there? Was all of that seriously one paragraph?
I don't have anything against crossovers, and I really enjoy Pokémon, but this story just isn't very good. I'm just gonna trust that someone else will explain the specifics of where this story needs work. Good luck!
5519227 don't give up on your dreams! If you think no one will like them you know they are going to be at least some few that will like it. I've liked crossovers because at least some people made it feel like a come true episode
I think it would be best if you read some crossovers before you continue with this story. Honestly, I don't even know what the plot to this story is about
. And you are doing a lot of telling but not a lot of showing in this story.
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Uhm....Excuse me?
5519730 I try not to copy base material in my stories, so I think I'm pretty good.
5520071 Thank you