• Member Since 9th Jan, 2015
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Spring Heart


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A mare lives her normal life with her sister and friend whe a disaster occurs and changes everything they thought as daily life. She knows that to live, you must fight, and nothing, not even magic will help you.

This is not like the anime,

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 4 )

Hey I haven't read this yet but respect trying new things is respectable I mean an OC is easier to keep in character so keep doing what you're doin and I'm gonna read this
Ps you might wanna change the name like add some thing on at the end with :

5894661 yeah, I thought about it but I don't know what should I put.
Equestria would sound like Fallout and Friendship is Magic or anything like that is overused. I'll think about something but it may help if someone else has an idea for the title.

My computer is not working well so chapter 2 will have to wait. I think it is better than the first and I've learnt some writing techniques.:twilightsheepish:r:derpytongue2:

Three chapter parters are coming up; the first one is almost finished and the 2 and 3 might be kind of short compared to the first. #HowIMetYourSister :pinkiegasp:

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