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SilverTongueOfCanterlot


We all have a little darkness within us

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Wow! That was funny. Could use a bit more length but not bad.

Were you drunker than Trixie when you wrote this?

The two Unicorns laid in bed side by sit, sheets stained with the erotic juices currently leaking form their private areas as they tried to cool off and clam down.

Or were you just madly mashing your thumbs on your phone and not caring whether or not your auto-correct would turn your magnificent octopus into a pile of meaningless words like the above sentence? I mean, it's sending people into a great deal of hilarity back here, but if you're going to continue to churn out ponyfic, I would invest in some patience to NOT hit 'send' the minute you've finished madly typing.

I'm putting this in my read later solely for the idea and the cover art. XD

“No… sigh my horn is stuck.” Luna pressed a hoof to her mouth snickering before she burst out laughing rolling around on the floor. “Oh just shut up and help me! Uuugh! I think I might need a drink after this.”

Luna, either run or prepare to have sexytimes with your sister.

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No I just made a few spelling mistakes that's not too uncommon on the internet

You misspelt disciple.

5523337 I know I'm gonna go through it and fix the errors

and from there we see a clear message as to why you shouldn't write after you start to feel a little tipsy

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You're right. It's not too uncommon on the internet at all.

That's what coined Sturgeon's Law, after all.

Welcome to the 90%.

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I don 't drink, this was just a randomly written fic inspired by watching too many Mindless Gonzo fic reading vids on youtube, look if you don't like it just ignore it

I curse the inventor of the dislike button he should've made a button that blocks the content to you and you alone for goodness sakes

marvellous,

a drunk and horny Trixie, a genderbent Twilight, gamer Luna and Celestia gets stuck

comedy gold right here

We uh, forget when we are excited and cannot help but.”

No, it's because you're too dumb to learn Modern English

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-.-... I happen to have passed my GCSE with a high grade thank you, I am handling the errors but excuse me if my computor's spelling and grammer check is a dumbass,mlp ease do not attempt to mistake me for an illiterate sir or I shall show you just how lethal a weapon my silver tongue can be

I am fluent in modern english and even he old kings english a language that many take great struggle in even attempting

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Thank you, glad at least a few commenters care to say something nice

So far only one person has pointed out the few errors nicely everyone else has just insulted me -.-

5528079 I was referring to the Luna in this fic

Greetings citizen of the Internet, I have done a reading of this fic, found here:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RlGgW7pYPOM

I hope someone enjoys.
With love.

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AWESOME thanks XD

Also the hmm are her giggling XD but with her mouth closed, you try giggling or chuckling the hehe sound turns into a hmhm sound

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Wow, thanks for clearing that up, I was wondering why there was so many "hm"s in there.
You are very welcome.

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Not a problem, I loved the reading, perhaps one day you and I can collaborate and do an updated version

Just for fun and to clear up a few spelling and or grammatical errors XD

Also I included the link in a seperate chapter called readings by fans XD

5701340

Ok sorry disregard the update idea

Especially if ti made you upset I swear that was not my intention :twilightblush:

Just my OCD Kicking in lol

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Never worry about anything, I love working with people who appreciate this kind of thing.
If you want another reading or whatever, let me know and I'll add it to my work-list!

5704933

Ok great thanks ^^

(Ok just editing this lol yeah if possible now that I've fixed the spelling errors I would like you to do to other reading of Trixie's great and powerful urges if possible XD)

5704933

Hey it's not done yet but could you do a reading of this fanfic I've been working on? http://www.fimfiction.net/story/246003/less-is-more

Gotta say kinda disappointed with myself that I haven't finished any of my other flics yet but then again I'm doing them one short chapter at a time and they're cleaner so XD that kind of stuff takes time

Comment posted by MalariaBrainfiction deleted Aug 7th, 2017

6397160 i have no idea where you got that form btu that is not what this story as about in the slightest

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