King Sombra. Queen Chrysalis. Nightmare Moon. Discord. Alone, they failed in taking Equestria from the Princesses and the Mane 6. United, they become a threat beyond anything the girls have seen. With nothing more than a grudge against the Crown and the Elements, these 4 very different foes will rise up for the chance to reclaim what is theirs.
Join Twilight Sparkle as she journeys across Equestria with brand new friends to find the power necessary to rid the world of this impossible nightmare. This will be the biggest fight they've had yet. Takes place between season 3 and 4.
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I would very much like some feedback if you find some things wrong with this story
None of these villains goals are compatible with each others. Revenge is stupid because all of them have another goal previous to that leading to their first defeat. And it's THIS goal that really matter, not revenge.
NM wanted the ponies to love her and her nights, that's why she got jealous of Celestia and that's her first goal. Wich is totally incompatible with Chrysalis goal to use all the ponies into snack for her and her changelings. Looking at the comics you see that a pony being feed on by a changeling looks more than half-dead. Wich is incompatible with Sombra's need for slaves or NM need for ponies to rule over.
And none of them would like Discord messing with their goal. Discord himself would find eternal night or dead ponies pretty boring really fast.
oh, buck... if Ditzy hears about this... *gulp* anypony remember that video where Ditzy raged at not having a lemon muffin surprise. That is the best case scenario... at least for Sombra.
6455387 Boo! More lasers!!
6456118 ...Oh......OH! AHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
man i LOVE it when people make hilarious references!