When Twilight left, Sunset forgot to ask how Princess Celestia was doing. Seeing as she will not get an answer, the former student to the Solar Goddess attempts to move on and live life as a student to Princess Twilight.
One night, while Sunset drifts further into her dreams, she is visited by none other than the guardian of dreams: Princess Luna of Everfree. This will only end one way, and that way is completely opposite of what Sunset had been expecting. Takes place directly after Rainbow Rocks.
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Not bad at all, you captured all three of them well. Not many can get Luna's more formal way of.speaking.
Really good, I hope you will advance on this story in the future ^^
I'm gonna assume Luna got a look at someone with dirty thoughts in mind, Please do a spin off on that.
5674550 Hmm...
Put on my obscenely long read later list. Will review.
6478979 This was really heartwarming.
Short, but really good. Your story got everything it needs to be great, and added to my favourites ;).
Unfortunately, this set the tone for the whole story. It was sloppy and rushed. The dream was a bizarre experience, and there was a random line about makeup in the middle of what was supposed to be an emotional scene. And now there's a spell that can take her back to Equestria without using the portal? Oy vey.