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HOLY fucking shit in a basket!!!!!
NEW CHAPTERS!!!!!
That was GLORIOUS.
In his little rant he didn't say anything about pinkie pie.
Best revenge ever.
i love what you did
Oh good sir, YOU ARE BACK!!!!
And with style, if i can say. Damm good chapters!
Must see the disapointment of Celestia, and, what happened with the one that made the problems start, our Lord of Chaos?
Oh, this just fills me with ecstasy......more...I WANT MORE!
Well, I'm waiting for more. You amaze me, author.
'Tis indeed glorious to behold, but I wonder why he spared Pinkie from his little rant.
Is he satisfied with how she's breaking, or does he, mayhaps, have something planned specifically for her?
6715210 From what I'm reading, he doesn't have to. Pinkie's supposed to be laughter, but one look at anything around her and you'll see that she probably thinks she helped cause this sadness.
You skipped Applejack when she was just as bad as the others. I very much loved the whole projection of the trial to the masses. Still a lack of old tia and luna but I very much like that little character fleshing out you did at the end of the chapter there. Looking forward to more chapters. Thank you
6715210 Because in the original story, she did everything to IGNORE him, and never even attempted to approach him.
Returning the favor, it is.
We no need no water, let the motherfuckers BURN!
6715332 Definitely Rosie
Interesting. I had a funny feeling that i should re read this story yesterday, and today there are two new chapters.
Great job, as always! Love the revenge scene!
Well they are in jail so what else could he do if he's not going to execute them?
As dark as this is, I love it!
I'm not one for these kinds of stories, but this is good.
And as for the "Field Trip", I'm guessing the families of the Mane Six are next.
I like this.
Dark, but has just the right amount of goodwill. I like it.
6715327 He didn't skip AJ. He skipped Pinkie. Pinkie didn't buck him like he says in his condemnation spiel, AJ did.
To be fair, the way it's phrased confused me, too. It could use a touch-up.
That little voice, Jason? It's your morality chain.
He hasn't gone full monster if a part of him still loves and cares for the classic representation of the mane six. Whether it'll die out and leave behind nothing but a husk with a dark soul, or it'll grow in his conscience and also affect his tormentors for better or worse, remains to be seen.
Now, I think this is missing a narrative spot from the six's perspective. Let's hear what they have in their minds and hearts.
6715575 Ugh. I hated the goodwill. Don't know how a part of him can still care about them. This story has been way too light hearted.
This chapter was fucking epic. I love stories where Humans have a personal vendetta against ponies when they wronged the Human.
I kind of want to hear Twilight's reasoning behind her actions, but if it's like the one in Vlad's It Never Really Ends, then I think Jason is somewhat justified in is own actions.
My guesses on what Jason plans to do:
1. Something involving the Tree of Harmony
2. Parading the girls around to towns ponies. Telling of their miss-deeds, and how the so called Bearers of Harmony have misrepresented them as a nation
3. Destroy Ponyville
4.Something involving going through the Crystal Mirror
this story is a nice change of pace from the usual things I read. I like the occasional dark tale. And sweet vengeance is always fun to read. following for more
Whats Celestia's take on all this? She only showed up a little bit in the last chapter.
And here I thought this story was dead. Glad to see it commence.
This...was satisfying as FUCK. Finally, a story that brings forth the TRUE level of good old fashioned revenge. None of that 'your punishment is to become my student' or 'forgiven right on the spot' shit that both the canon show and the fandom has been piling forth. Heck, this is FAR better than the crap that 'It Never Really Ends' is bringing forth (seriously, that story's sense of justice is fucked up).
In the end, Screw Justice. Because Justice is just as corrupted as the ponies are.
Now, the only thing that matters is revenge. And boy, does this story deliver!
And I can't wait to see what the future will bring.
it's interesting that he skipped Pinkie Pie altogether, already hinting at the conflict inside of him, even before the exposition came in. She didn't hurt him during the three years prior to this. She didn't help him, but she didn't harm him either, so she's not on the same level of shit as Applejack and Rainbow Dash are. That, and unlike the others, she realizes exactly what she and the others have done, and is truly remorseful for it. If any of the Mane 6 have a chance at forgiveness and redemption, it's her, and Jason appears to already know it.
6715978 I'm with you on this I want to hear what celestia and Luna think about what happened. She seemed to be in shock hearing that the elements had done those things and to an extent didn't want to face that her ponies that are supposed to be loving and peaceful are in reality spoiled xenophobes. I'm also wondering what's going to happen to rose. She made plenty of mistakes but I think to an extent we could blame that on her anxiety. I would also like to hear more about why the mane 6 did what they did.
And it looks like our Protagonist may have gone completely mad. Not that surprising.
This pleases me.
Wonderful! I can't wait to see what happens next!
What truley bothers me is that Twillight dosen't seem to fully comprehend what she has actully done.
She's acting like she was against the other villans that tried to take over/destroy Equestria, she sees him only as Another powercrazed lunatic that will be stopped sooner or later by the Power of love and friendship, she even said and i quote “To fulfill your petty revenge scheme?” She's got Everything she and her friends did to the poor sod told to her Word for Word, and her reaction was something like
"Yeah, yeah, you had a bit of a bad day, that's still no excuse to act this way."
It's like she's is in complete and utter denial of what she and her friends really did.
Pinkie and Rarity seems to have some sort of grasp of what the contributed to, Apple jack and Rainbow seems to be on the same page as Twillight, and Fluttershy.......wow, i really hate to say this, but she just pissed me off, lying down and whimpering all the time, not trying to explain herself or trying to make amends, just shivering and sniveling, i was hoping that her reaction would have been along the lines of Pinkies, since she is the element of Kindness, but all she did was curl up in a ball and hoped that this was all a bad Dream.
I really do hope that we will see Celestias take on all of this, must be hard for her to realise that she should have explained to her precious subjects that love and harmony was meant for all species, not just ponys.
Just wanted to thank everyone for the comments and support! Thank you all!
6715866 I totally agree with you on "It never really Ends". That story left me more confused as to what's going on then anything else so far.
6716660 Yup, as much as Celly loves her Little ponys she REALLY should have explained it to them in detail, she if anyone should have known how closeminded and skittish they can be about new and unfamiliar things.
Still want Jason to burn in hell. I read the original story and frankly, it seems like it was designed to turn the girls into villains for no reason beyond author fiat. It's not as bad as some stories where the characters are OOC for no real reason, but it's still bad. And frankly, Jason and the Changelings need to go down for what they've done. Revenge does them nothing more than piss others on this world off. For the actions of six ponies, they decide to invade an entire nation and conquer it. Fuck. No. He could have gone to Canterlot right at the outset and talked to Celestia about what happened. Did he? No. He could have gone to any of the other pony cities to try to get help. Did he? No.
No, what he did was to ally with being that were out to enslave an entire race because six ponies didn't react to him the way he was expecting.
Someone needs to kick his head in and put him in chains.
Now.
I read these two chapters 3 times, and relished them immensely. Hopefully some shitty Duex Ex Machina doesn't just steal Jason's victory away from him. I want this. I want to see justice for this guy.
6716568 I love this story. It reminds me of old rape/revenge movies I loved when I was younger. I love when someone gets exactly what they deserve for being a terrible person. And would we possibly be getting Celestia's take on this next chapter
This story is so fucking badass
6716824 Ok, how about we do to you what they did to him, and see how rational you are after words?
6717024
So then you consider his behavior justified because of the actions of a few?
You cheered for the Joker in the Dark Knight, I take it.
6717117 Fuck yeah!
p.s my point still stands, if you haven't gone through that much adversity, you cannot possibly imagine what is going on in his head
6717157
Bear in mind, he assumed people who had never met him would react the way he expected them to, and when they didn't live up to his expectations, he decided that their behavior, which admittedly makes sense from their perspective (I don't approve of how they acted, but let's be honest, the ONLY reason they did so was author fiat), justifies terrorizing AN ENTIRE COUNTRY.
Given that he decided to involve innocents and not just the six ponies he had issues with? Fuck yes I want him to go to hell.
6717170
See my earlier comment as well as my immediate response to CJDJPON3.
6717243 Forget about all that, I'm still mad at what you said about the Joker
6717288 Nice catch
If there's one thing this story and all the reviewers and drama in this fandom has taught me, hell hath no fury like a brony scorned.
And so I post this with the qualifier that I actually love these little ponies (the non-evil canon ones) and Sparklebutt is actually one of my favorites.
That said...
Oh, we love you Princess Sparkle! You're the darlin' of us all!
You're the curse of the whole damn nation, we poor migrants, most of all!
You've destroyed me hirin' prospects, and you've put me on the dole.
If I could get me hands on you, I'd kick you up the hole!
Oh, we love you Princess Sparkle! No one in this world can match her!
But she's trying to take their rights away from them backwaters once again!
We're not fretting o'er your blasted laws, nor your bein' rather crass.
You can keep them Princess Sparkle, and please stick them up your ass!
Oh, we love you Princess Sparkle! You're the cutest girl of all!
Such a biddy, fine and lovely, sure the likes she's not at all!
When she holds negotiations, things, they'll always reach a hitch.
She's a world in ruination, and such a schemer that old bitch!
Oh, we love you Princess Sparkle! With these prices risin' high!
And the work is getting awful scarce, we be sufferin', that's no lie!
Now you say you'd like to stay, but you've been here long enough.
In our taxidermist's parlance, I'll say please and go get stuffed!
Oh, we love you Princess Sparkle! Sure you know a trick or two!
And when you down tumblin', we'll know just what you'll do!
Sure, you'll dress up in your finery, and bitch with all yer' might.
And all your friendship toutin' is just a lot of shite!
(A good verse now!)
Oh, we love you Princess Sparkle! Like yer' old man likes a brew!
Such a lad, your boytoy Sentry, when he's had a drink or two!
Yes, he'll take a pint of cider, and a glass of pony mist.
And because he's stuck with you all day, no wonder he's always pissed!
Oh, we love you Princess Sparkle! You're the darlin' of us all!
You're the curse of the whole damn nation, we poor migrants, most of all!
You've destroyed me hirin' prospects, and you've put me on the dole.
If I could get me hands on you, I'd kick you up the hole!
... I might've had a couple.
this is updating again!?
aww yis!!
6717243
You are correct in a sense. But the other ponies are far from innocent in my opinion. But Of course this is just a story so no reason to argue over someones opinion
6717117 yes yes i did since he actuly was tryng to stop almost all the crime in gotham
oh how i missed this story great updates
6718969
What? No, the Joker was trying to create anarchy. Where the hell did you get the idea that the Joker was trying to STOP crime?
6718360
Really. What exactly did any of the ponies in Canterlot do to him? Or anywhere else in Equestria, for that matter?