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5814536 Now.
Please tell me you'll be updating more frequently.. I can't wait at all to read the next chapter.
5846498 I'll try, but for now...it's looking pretty bad. Work is riding me like a mule mate.
Nice, a lot different then the other version.
More? Please? <3
Talkin' of Gak? That's a paddlin'.
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5846504 I thought different would be good in this case, something new, y'know?
5846515 I'M TRYING, HON!
5846537 And then, WHAM! JASON!
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NOBODY EXPECTS THE CHANGELING INQUISITION!
5846583 "Hey brah, do you think it'll fall?"
"What, bro?"
"Rome."
5846598 I'm tryin'!
And so finally karma kicks Equestria in the ass, with an iron boot, on fire.
AWW YISS MOTHER FUCKING UPDATE! I honestly forgot what the first two chapters were about...
5846661 hell yeah
Yes! Take that! Now for revenge
omooomoomyyy celestia!!! it updated!!!! *froths in mouth*
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No, it's supposed to mean that the response to revenge is more revenge, so you can expect to end the same way if you go down that direction. Blood feuds tend to only end when one side is wiped out or not at all.
So a second changling invasion and Luna is no where to be seen. Again.
An eye for and eye
And the world goes blind.
But in this case
Zero fucks were given.
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Blindness is the sacrifice we make for true justice. Funny thing about your senses, when one disappears, the others strengthen to offset that absence.
5850339 there's a reason Justice is a blind woman with a swordpanampost.com/wp-content/uploads/lady-justice-1.jpg
This is awesome. Total victory is best victory. I love me a good stomp fest.
It's so good.
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Well, MLP is hardly War of the Rose, but you don't need to have to see someone call Edward at him to know that this can't possibly end well in the end, no matter what. He's already doomed, whatever ultimately comes from it.
Also, in my defense that looked like the exact kind of misinterpretation a lot of people here would make without any intention behind it, so, good job with the imitating.
5852499 well played
what a coincidence. The mom and colt that i was imagining when i read this was them!
badass mind and insight... i like the way he thinks. Not to mention all his gizmos in tow.
Great work sir.. i look forward for the next inatallment.
Wow, now this is a good story! Can't wait to see what happens next!
Enough of the cliffhanging shit and get to the goddamn good part already!
Hopefully this isn't going to turn into one of those standard 'bad guy turns good' and Jason acctually wins unlike all the other villians of Equestria... frankly, im suprised hes using nothing more then a musket and that the changlings don't have any reversed engineered human weapons since he has knowledge no matter how basic it can be of humanity's weapons and war feats.
With magic and that knowledge, even using a trial and error tactic to build the stuff you would think 3 years is more then enough time to outfit a few squadrons of the changeling military with guns and explosives and get Jason some better weapons then a musket... or maybe the weapon equiped changeling parts of the military were put on standby for the invasion as backup while Jason chose the musket for either sedimental reasons or it's the weapon hes best with. It's also possible that muskets were the only weapon besides a few explosives(I highly doubt Chrysalis wouldn't attemt to make grenades after hearing about them... and land mines, imagine a changeling with access to land mines.) that the changlings could mass produce while the R&D part of the hive is working on improvements for later on.
5950114 Knowing about assault rifles and building one are two very different things. It took us centuries to go from sword and shield to lining up in big rows with single-shot muzzle-loaders, and much longer to come up with the repeater cartridge. The tricky thing about the cartridges, I think, would be the exact positioning of the firing pin to strike against the back of the cartridge, so downgrading just before that, you have a flintlock musket, which I think would be feasible given Jason's lack of knowledge.
5950474 I gurantee the only reason unicorns or changelings don't have as advance weapons as humanitys is due to the lack of creativity they show in the show itself... instead of asking 'why' they perfer to go with the flow while we humans ask why and question everything. With magical abilities so many things would of been sped up development wise and things would of been made DECADES before they acctually were.
It's not the lack of resources or Jasons minimal knowledge that would hold back development despite you refering so since I would bet my life that they would have better guns in 3 years and my reasons are following since they are pretty much common sense on the logic side of things...
First is the idea. Jason comes from a would without magic but has weapons that shot little metal pieces at dang near the speed of sound. Give the knowledge or just a vague idea of such weapons to a race on a world that has been in a 1000 year stagnation period, maybe even more and if that race has a certain determination or drive to bring the idea to life through trial and error with magical powers... they will get it working sooner or later, double with the guidance of a human they can show their 'experiments' to in order to see if they are good enough. I can GURANTEE you... if the changelings were able to made a flintlock, they would keep going cause why stop there when you can ensure your victory over your enemies?
Second if Chrysalis herself... this is so obvious it hurts. If Chrysalis hears of even HALF the weapons humanity has, there is no doubt in my mind that she would jump at the chance for a 1UP of the equestrians. Projectile weapons that fire faster then a pony can put up a sufficent shield and are FAR superior to bows or crossbows? Explosives that can out power any explosive based spells? Portable explosive weapons that don't need any magic, both for traps and combat? I bet you any money that even with a lack of knowledge on the subject Chrysalis would attempt to make the ideas world with a 'throw things at the wall' method if she had too.
The fact the musket was a sucess pretty much nulls any argument you could make since the fact of the matter is there should be a few better guns if the musket is any indication... at least 2-3 since they had 3 years to develop them. Explosive are in the same boat and you can't use the typical 'lack of gunpowder' most fics use since alchemy IS a thing in the show and does have some explosive components... harness that and you have a magical version of a grenade that could possibly be BETTER then a grenade!
I shouldn't really have to point out anything else, it's just the existence of the musket over a 3 year time frame when the musket development would of taken less then a year at most as well as no explosives has thrown the entire weapons scene off balance... if it was a more peaceful changeling leader I would under stand a bit but this is CHRYSALIS.
Chrysalis would jump at the chance for a 1UP so this just got out of character to an extent.
5950579 Well, c'mon, Jason's not a total idiot. I doubt he'd play with all his cards displayed for Chrysalis to see.
Yeah keeping cool , probably the only story that made me read over and over again
Burn all the things!
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6032022 Why so sad? I thought he was meant to be angry?
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6032244 Never mind.
I'm sorry... no.
This story would be nice, it really would, but its key point relies on the mane 6 being out of character. Now, people talk about how ponies are xenophobic, how they hate all other species.
How?
In every single episode where they encounter another species, the ponies either have a good reason to dislike them, or the species is an accepted part of the community (such as the gryphon in S2E24).
Let's just see... gilda - completely unlikeable asshole, no sympathy. She was redeemed in S5E8 anyways, and besides, dash made friends with her when she was a kid. Buffalo - no real lines of communication had been established between the two civilizations (if they'd talked to each other they'd have seen things another way, but that's a moot point). Dragonshy dragon - dragon threatened their livelihood by blocking out sunlight for crops. Diamond Dogs - kidnapped a citizen of Equestria, they're lucky they didn't have a military force sent after them. Adolescent Dragons - Bad influence on children, same problem as adult when older. Minotaur - they didn't even run Iron Will out, he just moved on to start a new show in another town. Changelings/Discord - obvious.
That's it. That's every encounter with a foreign species where the ponies truly disliked that species, barring marginal things like in Lost Treasure of Griffonstone.
You see that pony in the corner over there? That's Trixie. The mare who was run out of Ponyville just for trying to make a living. Yeah, Ponies can hate their own species too.
EQUESTRIA ISN'T AMERICA. They don't just treat everything like it's a freaking terrorist - they wouldn't treat a human like that, either. Yes, at first they would be terrified, but if the human just bothered to TALK TO THE PONIES, they would stop. why? Because that's the equestrian way. If anything, the ponies would naiively trust the human, even as he went to stab them in the back.
But this? This just doesn't make sense. Why did Applejack just run him off her farm? Did he talk to her - did he let her know he was an intelligent creature? If he didn't let her know that, of course Applejack would run him out, he's a threat. But he obviously didn't try and talk to her, because if she did, SHE WOULDN'T HURT HIM. Applejack and Rainbow Dash are impulsive and defensive - not stupid. They would immediately stop if the human demonstrated higher-level intelligence. Hell, they may even think he's a friendly animal at first, and not attack him at all.
But no, let's say for the sake of argument that they did run him off into the forest.
WHY DIDN'T HE COME BACK.
It's explicitly stated that he spent several years in the forest. Why?! Why would he fucking do that?! If at first you don't succeed, try try again! Just go back the next day and try and talk to them again! Eventually, they WILL realize you're not a threat! But you need to make an effort to be friends with them - don't just go one-and-done! If they keep kicking you down, GO TO FUCKING CELESTIA. It was stated that she saw you before, and you can just go back to her, and she'll come down with you to talk to the damn ponies!
But no. No. This story just insists on circlejerking off to the ponies being "intolerant assholes", just so that the pony haters can get their kicks. Yeah, if you think the mane six would act this way, you obviously don't know the basics of the fucking show, so you may as well be a hater for writing this mary-sue-pony-bashing horseshit.
(apologies, ridiculously long rant over. Here comes the butthurt over my opinion - bring it on, i'm ready for you.)
6034081 You'd think that now, wouldn't you?
6038016 Danke
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Plan on updating this anytime soon?
6048856 Could be a while...work and all.
Hot dang, I'm getting goose bumps all over. I can hardly wait for the next chapter.
Finally. I've been looking for a good sequel to that old story for a LONG time. Time for revenge.
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So good.
6076693 Awesome, thanks brah!
6075956 I don't understand this reference
6076606 Sad, but true.
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It's from a game called Heavy Rain, it's practically a psychological drama. In one part of the game your kid called Jason goes missing in a crowded mall, your tasked with finding him. You can only move and use a repeatable quick time event where all you have to do is call out: Jason! You just press X to Jason