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I had a legit Cheshire Cat grin on my face all the time as I read these updates. Yeeeessssss~
The pain, the grief, the anguish! Glorious.
These new chapters are, without a doubt...
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This amuses me. It amuses me greatly. Thank you for writing it.
Bah. This angers me. At least I don't overact at the humans, which I might make a story of. That would go against everything I stand for.
As for the pain, the grief, the anguish. It angers me so greatly.
Hmm I'm still waiting for the "it was discord's curse or something" shoe to drop. Well, that not happening, interesting to see he's still conflicted. But he delivers what he considers to be justice.
That's not to mention he DID manage to get his changelings food. Through hate and a stain that will remain for most likely centuries, but he did none the less. That's got to be worth something, at least.
7195000 Discords Curse? This feels more like a Nightmare.
What amuses me is how restrained he actually is... compared to human armies and conquerors in the past he doesn't even make the top 10000 list of monsters that humanity can produce. He's still playing nice and fair, being civilized in his destruction. If they think he is a monster now, it might be interesting for him to give a rundown to some of the mane six just what he could do if he truly put his mind to it...what humans have done historically to other humans over much much less.
I'm just hoping he doesn't forgive them at this rate. Also, is it too soon to play this?
7195023 Discord recognizing him and trying to talk with him before being petrified makes me believe he has something to do with it. And if not, well, that's why I put "or something" there XD
But indeed, it DOES seem like a nightmare...
He is cruel and dark, but all his actions feel somewhat justified. However he is reaching a point where it may be too much. So far, he has followed his desire for 'Justice' but he needs to be careful he doesn't too far.
I like the current state of the Mane 6. Fluttershy, and Pinkie are completely heart broken by both their own actions and that all the pain he is causing others stems from them. Rarity seems to have accepted that she is the bad guy here but won't let herself fall into complete misery. Applejack was initially defiant, though it seemed more like her lashing out to avoid looking at the truth of her own actions. Now though she sees that she is the cause of his pain and subsequently the suffering of others and feels horrible for it. Twilight is struggling to try and keep up hope with the others. She seems to be ignoring her own actions and focusing on the pain that the others are experiencing. However she is at her limits here. Rainbow however angers me, as she still sees wholly unrepentant. I wonder what it will take to finally break it to her that this would have been avoided if she'd been nicer to the guy.
The pain this story describes in such a visceral way just brings me no small amount of school girl giddiness.
So please,
Continue.
7195051 Well, I think his revenge is gonna be mostly over now. The only thing left are preventive measures (to ensure Ponyville can't do what it did again), and I assume stuffing Scootaloo tail-first into the meat-grinder (literally), along with the rest of ponyville, will get Dash and Twi to break too.
7195037
heh exactly! vlad the impaler comes to mind
Anyways, thank you for 2 more awesome updates. Looking forward for the rest of the story. It was worth the wait.
7194946 Thanks brah!
7194948 And thanks for reading!
7194984 Good, I'm doing my job then.
7195000 I hope there is some redemption in that. It's all Jason has left.
7195007 Nice catch!
7195040 It is never too soon for power metal.
7195051 I'm hoping to walk that line between justified and too far, y'know?
7195061 But is Jason still a good man? Also, yeah, this hurt to write. Not as bad as the next part, though. It hurt so good.
7195037 Maybe at some point...maybe...
7195087 Oh yeah, it hurts really good, I'm aware :)
7195098 Over? oh, my poor, sweet summer child. It's barely begun.
7195145 And thank you for reading and supporting with comments!
I always treasure these types of fiction, they always fill me up with a sadistic glee that makes me enjoy it even more. Carry on Sir kildeez, I shall be patiently waiting.
7195209 Hopefully, you won't have to wait long :)
7195210 living up to the username, huh?
Okay, I'm calling it here. There's something in the background pulling strings with some seriously pervasive mind altering magic. Who exactly I don't know but this is all adding up.
Discord recognizing Jason and his reactions to him, the atypical behaviour of the ponies towards Jason, that spark of realization that we're seeing before they remember, he claims of not being that kind of pony and the 'gray' sensation when recollection their actions. All of this plus Jason's rage and dark thoughts tenaciously yanking him back each time he considers the effects of his actions, or that spark of love flares. It all adds up to an outside influence.
Was he tormented and abused by the ponies? Yes, it seems so. However, I believe something or someone has been engineering this situation, suppressing the natures and memories of ponies and Jason both, and letting events unfold.
To what end though? I'm not sure. Was this an attempt at some kind life lesson that has run out of control by underestimating the fury of humanity? Is it a plot to destabilize and destroy Equestria by attacking the moral base? Are they even still actively manipulating events or is it just now that the initial spells and control are starting to wear off? And the big question: who would be capable of something on this scale and what would they gain?
The fact that Discord didn't seem to be under the same mental effects and blocks, knew of Jason, and considering mental magic being present, we can't even eliminate the possibility that Jason's memories could be tampered with; possibly to the extent of the entire five years being completely fictional.
The point is, something fucky is going on.
7195178 Oh yes. You are. Keep up building my rage. Plus, I am really disappointed with the Mane six. If they and ponies of Ponyville have not overacted, none this would have happen. Also, my rage still grows. Pain, the grief, the anguis disgust me. Burning down Ponyville just justify that, and I want to kill something.
These stories just fill me with glee. Keep up the awesome work.
The guy is a friggin pansy. The best thing to have done is lock all the ponies in their houses and then raze Ponyville to the ground.
I'm betting Discord corrupted the girls knowing this would happen. Grey is the clue.
Delicious
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I believe that would be the author
It does seem that way, but the story is stronger if they don't have the "it was mind control" excuse. I await either way to see how this plays out.
7195462
Hey! Leave me out of this! :p
I hope we get to see Celestias reaction too all of this soon honestly hit seemed to hit her like a ton of bricks that Jason suffered so much. While I do enjoy the retribution that is happening I want to see what the great leader of Equestria thinks of all this? Is she heart broken? Angry? Suffering from shock? What about Shining Armor Cadence, and Luna? Do they know why he is doing this or are they in the dark?
Update! Thnx!
This is glorious, can't wait to Celestia's reaction.
Yes. All of my yes. Every yes from every dictionary.
Hmm, all the destruction and moral torment is good, but how Jason is going to rule Equestria ? Maybe some equality, "welcome all who wish to coexist peacefully"; banning discrimination based on race; changelings who lived long in Equestria turning off their disguises, a message like "We captured your country long ago, just didn't want to inform you because you're specieist freaks hating because of exterior.";all major psychiatrists and psychoanalysts are turned out to be changelings...
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I think Luna has something to do with this.
She's been suspiciously absent from the story, somehow missing out on a second changeling invasion.
Jason's probably been having bad dreams for years, yet Luna doesn't seem to pick up on a soul plagued by nightmares for years on end. And since her dream magic might be seen as a form of mental manipulation, while it's not actual mind control, she could be using it to plant suggestions into everyone's head and no one would suspect a thing.
Someone had to have sent an invitation to Jason to let him come here in the first place. To breach the barriers between worlds would take some serious power. Like Alicorn levels of power.
With Celestia and the Mane 6 out of the picture, who does the rest of Equestria turn to in this crisis? Luna, of course.
Maybe Luna wasn't so forgiving of being locked in the moon for a 1,000 years.
7196050
That is true, very good point.
It might even turn out that this is all a sort of dream and that Jason is in some kind of coma from the failed suicide. That would be a right twist to the whole thing, eh?
7196050
... Holy plucking donuts with strawberry jelly! Holmes! Go back to the past! Our little and not so over-developed minds can't take ur intelligence!
P.S. That was so friking eye opening... Anyway. Damn.
P.S.S. Dis story is goooooood! This story's at par with 'Season of Darkness'! How much did the ponies fucked up? Bro... this story is so awesome! So adictive. Once you read it you will want more, until you reach the promised epilogue were all ur dreams are shattered along ur expectations...
... so much ur on my wurds!
7195245 ...maybe tone it down a little son, starting to scare me over here.
7195257 Will do!
7195336 We'll see
7195446 I would hope so ageofthenerd.com/wp-content/uploads/2015/06/505_hannibal_640.jpg
7195543 We will see on all accounts
7195590 Certain things do
7195669 I think we're all waiting for that one
7195948 Thanks!
7195997 Don't worry, I don't think we'll have to worry about a long rule from Jason
7196419 I hope not to disappoint
7195323 Death is easy and cheap. No, only in life can you suffer.
7196467 wait about spike is he incent from Jason attack? pony miss trick him for year so he should be spared for the pay back right?
BURN THE TOWN INTO THE GROUND UNTIL THERE IS NOTHING LEFT!!!!!!
That is if you can please
Next step: build a navy!
What? It would be one heck of a way to suppress rebellions in shore based cities. Just fire inland and they'll scatter. Also, would keep other nations out if he brought in gun power and ironclads. He is running an Empire now and he's gonna need powerful suppressing devices to keep order. A clockwork musket wielding changeling, cool. Just throwing a few ideas at yah see what you think.
Either way, nice to see this story still active. Nothing much of interest is on this sight anymore (at least for me) so seeing this story updated is a nice change.
Wow. OK I was not expecting this. I need to talk about this. I was not expecting to actually read this. I wanted to see what this story was about think about it for a bit and then leave it be. That is what I had planed to do. Give this story a quick look and then move on. But I cant. Now Obviously the whole treat the guy like shit thing is out of character for the ponies but we are all capable of looking past that for the sake of the story. This is genuinely an interesting, thought provoking and well written story. I love how this seems to be struggling with his revenge against them. If this goes where I think I may even be excited for future chapters.
I'm not at the point of giving this a like yet but I am going to follow this for now to see when you post more chapters.
Lets see where this goes.
7196798 ....sure.
7196827 That be the point :)
7196860 heheheheh...
7196905 Interesting idea....a consolidation of power, if you will.
7197200 Well, thank you! Thank you very much!
7195224 I'm just another guy in a long list of people who never asked for what they got. Sometimes you just have to let go and embrace what you've become.
7197200 if you havent noticed there are several signs that is actually something very fishy if you know what i mean discord even tried to tell him
Applejack finally got it! Now it's only Dash and twillight left that's in denial land.
It would seem that the reason Fluttershy has been merly crying and whimpering all this time wasn't because of her being her usual scared self, it's simply because she was being eaten alive by her guilt, and she couldn't express it until now.
7197819 Not quite, but no worries. We'll change that soon.
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Basically. You control the seas and you control what goes on in the world. You can even... encourage other nations into doing something with a little blockade.
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7198486 Empire Building 101
I can not stop reading this, my eyes are glue to every single word waiting to see what happen next. This is a masterpiece, a little dark, but that darkness is needed. The story is perfectly balance in every way. That no going overboard, but it walk the lines of cruel but fair.this bring me as much thrill as the battlefield 1 trailerif not more
Don't even tell me he's going to wimp out and forgive them.
7199122 This definitely fits for the main character. Also more chapters please.